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17 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Ayyy ay, ay, Guapa, estoy tarde, but this is just sush a lovely autumn haiku. I also love the photo. I've had so many horses and the interaction between horse and hound is spot on. Wonderful. Un abrazo de tu amaiga Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Ayyy ay, ay, Guapa, estoy tarde, but this is just sush a lovely autumn haiku. I also love the photo. I've had so many horses and the interaction between horse and hound is spot on. Wonderful. Un abrazo de tu amaiga Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you very much, my friend. Your generosity is always a precious gift to me and your feedback is extremely helpful. Thank you for the bottom of my heart.
namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor and poet
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
<>o<> Haiku 201 starts on April 5th<>o<>
~<>o<> Haiga starts on May 1st <>o<>~
Comment from l.raven
HI Gypsy, I think dogs are smarter than some people I know....definitely more loyal...I love your poem Queen of Haiku...and love your picture...very nicely written you...love ya girl...Linda xxoo
I fell about a week ago...I have a bad concussion and decided to get a bad virus as well...so between the two...sick....still not feeling to good...but a bit better...I guess it will take some time...sigh....I miss ya...take care...love xxoo
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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HI Gypsy, I think dogs are smarter than some people I know....definitely more loyal...I love your poem Queen of Haiku...and love your picture...very nicely written you...love ya girl...Linda xxoo
I fell about a week ago...I have a bad concussion and decided to get a bad virus as well...so between the two...sick....still not feeling to good...but a bit better...I guess it will take some time...sigh....I miss ya...take care...love xxoo
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 18-Mar-2017
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Oh no! pobrecita! (poor little one) I am so sorry you are sick and probably in pain from the fall. I will send you healing thoughts and lots of love... sweetie pie. Luv ya.
Thank you for the review <3
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Hi Gypsy, doing a bit better...but still a ways to go...the concussion is one thing...but this virus is a killer...thank you so much for all your healing thoughts sweet girl....and you are so very welcome...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Lu Saluna
I like your haiku great imagery and it is an autumn pass time. I always felt sorry for the poor little fox when I saw it television. I always thought the hunters were a bunch of bullies, lol. I am such a suck when it comes to animals.
Nice job.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I like your haiku great imagery and it is an autumn pass time. I always felt sorry for the poor little fox when I saw it television. I always thought the hunters were a bunch of bullies, lol. I am such a suck when it comes to animals.
Nice job.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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thank you, honey :)
Comment from Sasha
I love the unique way you present the hound an fox to represent autumn. The first two line are connected perfectly and the satori is superb. I enjoyed this one very much. Lovely illustration to go with this one too.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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I love the unique way you present the hound an fox to represent autumn. The first two line are connected perfectly and the satori is superb. I enjoyed this one very much. Lovely illustration to go with this one too.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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thank you, honey :)
Comment from Dean Kuch
loyal hound runs
ahead to flush the fox--
crisp Autumn morn ... Very nice, Gypsy.
Good nature sounds, coupled with a well composed haiku (featuring some nice alliteration in your second line), helped to place me right there in the scene.
Wonderfully well done...
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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loyal hound runs
ahead to flush the fox--
crisp Autumn morn ... Very nice, Gypsy.
Good nature sounds, coupled with a well composed haiku (featuring some nice alliteration in your second line), helped to place me right there in the scene.
Wonderfully well done...
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you, darlin, you are very kind :)
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Japanese Poetry Instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Very nice Gypsy, I love it.
I adore the picture, "crisp Autumn morn,
great sound effects. Wonderful autumn Haiku.
~Kerry~
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Very nice Gypsy, I love it.
I adore the picture, "crisp Autumn morn,
great sound effects. Wonderful autumn Haiku.
~Kerry~
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thank you, darlin, you are very kind :)
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Japanese Poetry Instructor
Member of the Haiku Society of America
~*~ a new haiku class every month ~*~
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Your welcome
Comment from Joan E.
What an intriguing picture! I enjoyed the scene your haiku captured and your notes about a deeper meaning. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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What an intriguing picture! I enjoyed the scene your haiku captured and your notes about a deeper meaning. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Wow! Excellent review, my friend. Thank you very much!
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor
Haiku Society of America Member
~A New Waka Class Every Month~
Comment from Grasshopper2
loyal friend runs
ahead in search of prey--
crisp Autumn morn
Ah, Haiijin-Sensei,
You scared Grasshopper with your title. I thought your poem was about a friend abandoning Lady Blue and then I read your haiku. Your title is excellent, but Grasshopper confused by haiku until I read your notes. Without your notes, Grasshopper does not get it because the image to Grasshopper is general. Haiijin-Sensei taught Grasshopper to write concrete, present tense action.
Grasshopper
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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loyal friend runs
ahead in search of prey--
crisp Autumn morn
Ah, Haiijin-Sensei,
You scared Grasshopper with your title. I thought your poem was about a friend abandoning Lady Blue and then I read your haiku. Your title is excellent, but Grasshopper confused by haiku until I read your notes. Without your notes, Grasshopper does not get it because the image to Grasshopper is general. Haiijin-Sensei taught Grasshopper to write concrete, present tense action.
Grasshopper
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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HAHAHA! You are right, the title is deceiving and funny when read by itself. Wow! Excellent review, my friend. Thank you very much!
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor
Haiku Society of America Member
~A New Waka Class Every Month~
Comment from judiverse
It is wonderful the way animals can relate to and befriend another. Years ago I had a dog and cat that were the best of friends. They played together, and when I took the dog for a walk the cat liked to follow us. Lovely description of the autumn morning. The word "crisp" says a lot. I can see the dog and horse becoming good friends. Very distinctive atmosphere presented in the poem. judi
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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It is wonderful the way animals can relate to and befriend another. Years ago I had a dog and cat that were the best of friends. They played together, and when I took the dog for a walk the cat liked to follow us. Lovely description of the autumn morning. The word "crisp" says a lot. I can see the dog and horse becoming good friends. Very distinctive atmosphere presented in the poem. judi
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Wow! Excellent review, my friend. Thank you very much!
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor
Haiku Society of America Member
~A New Waka Class Every Month~
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You're welcome. Take care. judi
Comment from TAB_that's me
Autumn is indeed a big hunting time at least where I live so I see the kigo even without the use 'Autumn' in the last line.
I don't always post but I am enjoying the challenge and reading others' haiku. Thanks for starting this group.
teresa
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Autumn is indeed a big hunting time at least where I live so I see the kigo even without the use 'Autumn' in the last line.
I don't always post but I am enjoying the challenge and reading others' haiku. Thanks for starting this group.
teresa
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Wow! Excellent review, my friend. Thank you very much!
Namaste,
Gypsy Haijin Sensei
Fanstory Instructor
Haiku Society of America Member
~A New Waka Class Every Month~
