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Afternoon hunt at Briarly Hall

Short story/ Found it

3 total reviews 
Comment from LoannaLois
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Oh gee....I wanted it to go on!ð?¤? This is a very well-written period piece and you have a true knack with this manner of speaking!!

 Comment Written 19-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Now that's encouraging -wanting it to go on ??? I am delighted and thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from Mustang Patty
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The impact of this letter can be quite profound! I hope that nothing too bad is revealed. Marriages that are a quarter of century old are susceptible to all kinds of things. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Interesting comment !!!! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Brett Matthew West
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"prised" is an unique way of saying "pries".

Interesting foreshadowing at the end.

The potential of danger lurking adds to the suspense of the storyline.

 Comment Written 15-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
    Great review -thanks for reading zanya