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Short story/ Found it
3 total reviews
Comment from
LoannaLois
Oh gee....I wanted it to go on!ð?¤? This is a very well-written period piece and you have a true knack with this manner of speaking!!
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
Now that's encouraging -wanting it to go on ??? I am delighted and thanks for the accolade zanya
Comment from
Mustang Patty
The impact of this letter can be quite profound! I hope that nothing too bad is revealed. Marriages that are a quarter of century old are susceptible to all kinds of things. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
Interesting comment !!!! thanks for reading zanya
Comment from
Brett Matthew West
"prised" is an unique way of saying "pries".
Interesting foreshadowing at the end.
The potential of danger lurking adds to the suspense of the storyline.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 21-Mar-2017
Great review -thanks for reading zanya
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