My Limericks
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "I Must Confess . . ."My Irish Poetry
10 total reviews
Comment from strandregs
Nobody can cure you .
only you can cure yourself.
Dr leonard Coldwell.
Emotions kill.
you're my man.
Limerick jockey.:-)) Z.
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Nobody can cure you .
only you can cure yourself.
Dr leonard Coldwell.
Emotions kill.
you're my man.
Limerick jockey.:-)) Z.
Comment Written 22-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 22-Mar-2017
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Thank-you so much for reading and commenting. It is always a pleasure and an honor~
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from irishauthorme
The Irish are prone to many devious acts because they have had to adopt this method of living to survive centuries of domination by invaders. Typical picture of the Irish is they are all drunks, and they will fight at the drop of a hat, read previous interpretation.
Catholic church is perfect for the Irish, on Sunday they absolve themselves from Saturday night's misbehavior.
Neat limerick!
irish
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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The Irish are prone to many devious acts because they have had to adopt this method of living to survive centuries of domination by invaders. Typical picture of the Irish is they are all drunks, and they will fight at the drop of a hat, read previous interpretation.
Catholic church is perfect for the Irish, on Sunday they absolve themselves from Saturday night's misbehavior.
Neat limerick!
irish
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks Irish, your perception is enlightening. BB
Comment from Cranial Thinker
To see and speak in transparency is truly liberating in itself but to acknowledge the actual smallness one feels in comparison to that all knowing, loving, forgiving, living, thriving being, is to breath in that winning knowingness that one knows but can some how never ever truly get any one not experiencing it to quite understand it fully....This is truly mind opening Brother Badger great write....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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To see and speak in transparency is truly liberating in itself but to acknowledge the actual smallness one feels in comparison to that all knowing, loving, forgiving, living, thriving being, is to breath in that winning knowingness that one knows but can some how never ever truly get any one not experiencing it to quite understand it fully....This is truly mind opening Brother Badger great write....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks again, and I sincerely hope and pray all is well with you. Happy St. Patrick's Day.
Brother Badger
Comment from winnona
Another well -written limerick poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Happy Saint Patricks day.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Another well -written limerick poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Happy Saint Patricks day.
Comment Written 15-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your kind review, I appreciate your loyal reviews.
Comment from Hitcher
Only in the catholic church, ha ha, I'm Joking :) This one bounced along nicely to its own beat and made for a fun read. as far as confessions go...Mmmmm, I'm not to sure about that mate, if the confession is going to cause more harm than good....Mmmmm, maybe not. Of course I have no secrets, I'm an open book that no one is aloud to read : ) Impressive!
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Only in the catholic church, ha ha, I'm Joking :) This one bounced along nicely to its own beat and made for a fun read. as far as confessions go...Mmmmm, I'm not to sure about that mate, if the confession is going to cause more harm than good....Mmmmm, maybe not. Of course I have no secrets, I'm an open book that no one is aloud to read : ) Impressive!
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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Thanks Hitcher, I understand your scepticism, as I am sceptical also~!
Blessings,
Brother Badger ~
Comment from lyenochka
What a great limerick for this week! It echoes the passage in 1 John, "if we confess our sins, He is faithful and just to forgive us our sins and cleanse us from all unrighteousness."
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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What a great limerick for this week! It echoes the passage in 1 John, "if we confess our sins, He is faithful and just to forgive us our sins and cleanse us from all unrighteousness."
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2017
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You nailed it, that was exactly what I had in mind, thanks for the fellowship~!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from Kingsrookviii
Ha! I love the attitude! This seems Irish enough, you know what they say about God taking care of small animals and drunks ... Well, most Irish that I've know do drink and confess after an incredible amount of lubrication from beer or good whiskey! Maybe both. Okay, probably and as for sin, perhaps a scuffle or "Debate." This is good. Bruce.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Ha! I love the attitude! This seems Irish enough, you know what they say about God taking care of small animals and drunks ... Well, most Irish that I've know do drink and confess after an incredible amount of lubrication from beer or good whiskey! Maybe both. Okay, probably and as for sin, perhaps a scuffle or "Debate." This is good. Bruce.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Bruce. An honor always, and a smile on my way to work. BB
Comment from crybry67
Limericks are such fun, both to read, and to write. I agree, He does clean us up, no matter how big the mess we make. Another great one. .. Christy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Limericks are such fun, both to read, and to write. I agree, He does clean us up, no matter how big the mess we make. Another great one. .. Christy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, your review and fellowship are well received.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment from royowen
This is a perfect Limerick, if that's what its intention was, it was perfect, with a nice rhythm and philosophy that I know actually works, they "confession is good for the soul! And it is, I can testify to it. Aabba rhyming makes for perfectly, well done Darren, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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This is a perfect Limerick, if that's what its intention was, it was perfect, with a nice rhythm and philosophy that I know actually works, they "confession is good for the soul! And it is, I can testify to it. Aabba rhyming makes for perfectly, well done Darren, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Roy, always a pleasure and an honor. A happy St. Patricks, and God Bless you and your kin.
Darren ~
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You too Darren
Comment from DR DIP
It's nearly a limerick. Love the photo.
Badge Would you try something for me and you don't I will totally understand.
I posted a poem the other day called OPEN UP TO ME I was dabbling around with a chorus and thought it could be possible song lyrics.
I can't play any musical instrument and I don't have a voice. Would you mind looking at it and tell me if it would work as a song with a bit of obvious tweaking to suit a melody or tune. I would be greatly appreciative
dip
OPEN UP TO ME
Open up to me my restless heart
Tell me how you feel
If we make a brand new start
Will you always reveal
For I wear you on my sleeve
For everyone to see
My restless heart it must believe
This is how it must be
CHORUS:
This is how it must be my love
This is how it must be
It's all that I've been thinking of
This is how it must be
Take me, come show me the way
To open up my restless heart
I'll listen to what you have to say
I love to play this part
We were always meant to be
Our destiny's together
Open up your eyes and see
Our love will be forever
CHORUS:
This is how it must be my love
This is how it must be
It's all that I've been thinking of
This is how it must be
How it must always be
How it must always be
dip
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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It's nearly a limerick. Love the photo.
Badge Would you try something for me and you don't I will totally understand.
I posted a poem the other day called OPEN UP TO ME I was dabbling around with a chorus and thought it could be possible song lyrics.
I can't play any musical instrument and I don't have a voice. Would you mind looking at it and tell me if it would work as a song with a bit of obvious tweaking to suit a melody or tune. I would be greatly appreciative
dip
OPEN UP TO ME
Open up to me my restless heart
Tell me how you feel
If we make a brand new start
Will you always reveal
For I wear you on my sleeve
For everyone to see
My restless heart it must believe
This is how it must be
CHORUS:
This is how it must be my love
This is how it must be
It's all that I've been thinking of
This is how it must be
Take me, come show me the way
To open up my restless heart
I'll listen to what you have to say
I love to play this part
We were always meant to be
Our destiny's together
Open up your eyes and see
Our love will be forever
CHORUS:
This is how it must be my love
This is how it must be
It's all that I've been thinking of
This is how it must be
How it must always be
How it must always be
dip
Comment Written 14-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2017
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Thanks Doc, be glad to, never hesitate to ask ~*
BB
