2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Doggy Jail"...stories and poems about the boys
49 total reviews
Comment from Lindagail Hall
My heart goes out to you I felt every angst your adoring dogs were feeling. I'm a dog lover myself and had to kennel mine I felt so bad I was crying. You opened that memory for me thanks for that. I really got into this story from the first few lines which is great from my point of view. You illeration on the dogs thoughts are spot on. I often wished if only my dogs could talk I wonder what they'd say? When mine were kennelled they didn't eat anything at all they had to call the vets in as we had never been parted before. I think the way you explained the dogs point of view was spot on.
I honestly couldn't say how this could be improved. Congratulations. Loved it
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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My heart goes out to you I felt every angst your adoring dogs were feeling. I'm a dog lover myself and had to kennel mine I felt so bad I was crying. You opened that memory for me thanks for that. I really got into this story from the first few lines which is great from my point of view. You illeration on the dogs thoughts are spot on. I often wished if only my dogs could talk I wonder what they'd say? When mine were kennelled they didn't eat anything at all they had to call the vets in as we had never been parted before. I think the way you explained the dogs point of view was spot on.
I honestly couldn't say how this could be improved. Congratulations. Loved it
Comment Written 19-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I love to write from my dogs' points of view. Bernie and Howie have a lot to say, and you will be seeing more from them.
~patty~
Comment from mvbrooks
What a fascinating point of view telling the story from one of the dog's view. Dogs are very loyal and do have strong personalities so it's no surprise that they become members of our families. This story is a positive tribute to their loyalty and love.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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What a fascinating point of view telling the story from one of the dog's view. Dogs are very loyal and do have strong personalities so it's no surprise that they become members of our families. This story is a positive tribute to their loyalty and love.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my dogs from their point of view. It is a completely different perspective of life.
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a heart-warming story, Patty.
Both entertaining and enjoyable.
Bernie and Howie are such cuties -
as a dog lover I can't have enough
of stories about pets.
thanks for sharing this, my friend.
Margaret
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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What a heart-warming story, Patty.
Both entertaining and enjoyable.
Bernie and Howie are such cuties -
as a dog lover I can't have enough
of stories about pets.
thanks for sharing this, my friend.
Margaret
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my dogs from their point of view. It is a completely different perspective of life.
~patty~
Comment from fafa
A good chapter of its book that I will have to read some chapters more to define my aptitude for thinking, I liked this one and I see that is marked like recognized work, congratulations
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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A good chapter of its book that I will have to read some chapters more to define my aptitude for thinking, I liked this one and I see that is marked like recognized work, congratulations
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my dogs from their point of view. It is a completely different perspective of life.
~patty~
Comment from Tpa
This was a lovely and Heartwarming story. Truly, a flawless tale that you wrote, describing through empathy what a pet must go through during a sudden change.
Indeed, a remarkable, well-written, and entertaining story.
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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This was a lovely and Heartwarming story. Truly, a flawless tale that you wrote, describing through empathy what a pet must go through during a sudden change.
Indeed, a remarkable, well-written, and entertaining story.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my dogs from their point of view. It is a completely different perspective of life.
~patty~
Comment from Bridge
I loved the story. It had me completely hooked right till the end. I could visualise the scenes. I adore dogs and a very well written story
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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I loved the story. It had me completely hooked right till the end. I could visualise the scenes. I adore dogs and a very well written story
Comment Written 18-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 19-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I love writing about my dogs from their point of view. It is a completely different perspective of life.
~patty~
Comment from Bichon
Oh I loved this one! Excellent story about the boys and their lovely visit. Great use of descriptive wording too, could really picture it all, from the tapping of the foot to the playing. Hope you might write more about these two cuties in the future!!
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Oh I loved this one! Excellent story about the boys and their lovely visit. Great use of descriptive wording too, could really picture it all, from the tapping of the foot to the playing. Hope you might write more about these two cuties in the future!!
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. Writing about these guys and their antics is a blast.
~patty~
Comment from Bill Schott
This cute story of the travails of kennelled dogs Bernie and Howie makes one take 'paws' when considering the feelings of a pup who doesn't understand what is really going on. Cool story.
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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This cute story of the travails of kennelled dogs Bernie and Howie makes one take 'paws' when considering the feelings of a pup who doesn't understand what is really going on. Cool story.
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. I had fun answering these questions, and I appreciate your comments and kind words.
~patty~
Comment from mbroyles2
I can certainly related to this. My dog tries to tear the house apart when we leave him alone. He doesn't bark, he just scratches at the door and pulls the cushions off the couch.
I really enjoyed reading this story about doggy jail. I bet that's exactly how they feel.
Great writing!
Michael
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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I can certainly related to this. My dog tries to tear the house apart when we leave him alone. He doesn't bark, he just scratches at the door and pulls the cushions off the couch.
I really enjoyed reading this story about doggy jail. I bet that's exactly how they feel.
Great writing!
Michael
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~
Comment from RGstar
What I would call a fable. A good personalization of a beautiful animal.
When young, I always liked fables, it brings fantasy and the imagination in focus, something we begin to lose on getting older.
Nice write. Good to support as you have done mine.
Have a great day, Patty.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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What I would call a fable. A good personalization of a beautiful animal.
When young, I always liked fables, it brings fantasy and the imagination in focus, something we begin to lose on getting older.
Nice write. Good to support as you have done mine.
Have a great day, Patty.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 17-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your generous review. I appreciate your time to read and review, as well as your thoughtful comments,
~patty~
