All Most Taken In
tangents of the truth2 total reviews
Comment from writeapoem
Rather different but truthful. Faith in God is never mistake. If I understand he was dreaming. If so I'm glad mercy woke him from his sleep. Very well written. All the best
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Rather different but truthful. Faith in God is never mistake. If I understand he was dreaming. If so I'm glad mercy woke him from his sleep. Very well written. All the best
Comment Written 11-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Writeapoem thank you for your review. giovanni
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Almost Taken In, has a huge message that many should hear. Life cannot be allowed to hit you and have you whine about it (too long). There's only one shot at this and we must take the blows, rise, and press on. There no cryong in life ball.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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This poem, Almost Taken In, has a huge message that many should hear. Life cannot be allowed to hit you and have you whine about it (too long). There's only one shot at this and we must take the blows, rise, and press on. There no cryong in life ball.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2017
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Bill Schott thank you for your review. giovanni
