Comment from cumulus365

Excellent

Hi Kerry, This is a correct haiku. The structure is succinct to the point. Line 1 is fragment with 2 syllables; line 2 is a phrase with 4 syllables; line 3 with 2 syllables being satori to this haiku. Your theme and meaning of this poem tells the gentle breeze among the tulips is like whispers is very romantic. Simple pleasure. This flower is spring/summer bloom therefore you have mentioned the kigo in line 2 appropriately. I really like this compact version. The illustration you selected for this poem enhances the poem with added colors. The color background is beautiful fuchsia that coordinate with the subject. Nicely written.

 Comment Written 10-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Mar-2017

Thank you so much for your wonderful review, I greatly appreciate you taking the time to read it.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Your words and the picture bring to mind tulips in a field with a warm summer breeze blowing. Tulips are always lovely. Their bulbs begin to bud when true spring arrives, and I'm looking forward to their return. Thank you for sharing,
~patty~

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017

Thanks for your review Patty, I appreciate it. Oh, I just wrote the questions down for quiz from your page, can't wait to get to it.

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

AS I already told you, I really like this one. Great word economy. Clear images in your first two lines. A great satotr with an aha moment of insight. Well done, my friend

 Comment Written 09-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Mar-2017

Thank you very much for all your help and support; Of course the lovely review as well.