Haiku Club Challenge Multi-Author
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "(Haiku) Summer Solstice"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
2 total reviews
Comment from LoveLifeKnight
Alright. I'm ready. Lets goo. This is a fun little poem. It seems to have a great rhythm to it, but I'm not very good at forms like this, so I'm not sure what to say. If you could choose anything for the picture you might want to leave the people out so that readers can imagine themselves instead
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Alright. I'm ready. Lets goo. This is a fun little poem. It seems to have a great rhythm to it, but I'm not very good at forms like this, so I'm not sure what to say. If you could choose anything for the picture you might want to leave the people out so that readers can imagine themselves instead
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Hmmm, that is a good idea, thank you for your delightful review
Comment from dragonpoet
Must be a pagan celebration. Nice bonfire. We all rejoice when hot weather comes around for the first time. Though we soon get tired of the heat and humidity.
I don't think you need the of in the first line. It is always said a haiku is 17 or less syllables with short long short format. So you can put the words in the correct order.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Must be a pagan celebration. Nice bonfire. We all rejoice when hot weather comes around for the first time. Though we soon get tired of the heat and humidity.
I don't think you need the of in the first line. It is always said a haiku is 17 or less syllables with short long short format. So you can put the words in the correct order.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful review, I will go check that out. I've just been a writing fool this morning. :)Can't get em' down fast enough. Have a great day!
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You're welcome. Enjoy the week,
dp
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You to, Thanks
