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Viewing comments for Chapter 12 "Haiku(rays of morning light)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
3 total reviews
Comment from Lu Saluna
I like your haiku is good. You have the two grammatically interconnecting lines and the satori is an insight to more daylight during spring.
Just a couple items, spring does not need to be capitalized and is "nigh" supposed to be "night"?
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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I like your haiku is good. You have the two grammatically interconnecting lines and the satori is an insight to more daylight during spring.
Just a couple items, spring does not need to be capitalized and is "nigh" supposed to be "night"?
Comment Written 08-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Mimiright
Short but has a lot of meaning. I understand that Joy comes in the morning. Despite the crazy hard times, the is usually hope at the end of the tunnel. And a new story to tell.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Short but has a lot of meaning. I understand that Joy comes in the morning. Despite the crazy hard times, the is usually hope at the end of the tunnel. And a new story to tell.
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Winslow
Dear Zanya,
For the spring comes in on the rays of the sun. Every day does indeed get longer. The light heralds her return and ushers in the season of rebirth.
Warm regards,
Winslow
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Dear Zanya,
For the spring comes in on the rays of the sun. Every day does indeed get longer. The light heralds her return and ushers in the season of rebirth.
Warm regards,
Winslow
Comment Written 05-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2017
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Engaging review -thanks for reading zanya
