Haiku/Haiga
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Comment from nordicgirl
Another beautiful piece with all the elements you like to include. Sensualiry, fighting ahainst old age etc. Love it. NG
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Another beautiful piece with all the elements you like to include. Sensualiry, fighting ahainst old age etc. Love it. NG
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
older women, matured, old witches, cougars, ... oldest rosebush
I get it. It takes women longer than men to do one thing or two and I think your haiku is about that 'one thing'.
Good job! Love it.
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older women, matured, old witches, cougars, ... oldest rosebush
I get it. It takes women longer than men to do one thing or two and I think your haiku is about that 'one thing'.
Good job! Love it.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
Comment from Gloria ....
This is most witty and apropos Mav. I see that you had the great good luck to receive not one, but two, three star reviews on this stunning beauty. I guess it was just one of those three star days.
The subtle eloquence with which you painted a picture of love from the oldest, and by definition wisest roses, love at the ready.
Subtly exceptional my dear.
Ange
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This is most witty and apropos Mav. I see that you had the great good luck to receive not one, but two, three star reviews on this stunning beauty. I guess it was just one of those three star days.
The subtle eloquence with which you painted a picture of love from the oldest, and by definition wisest roses, love at the ready.
Subtly exceptional my dear.
Ange
Comment Written 07-Mar-2017
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiga. The oldest rose bush blooms with the mist beautiful moist blossoms ready to enjoyed by the onlookers. An excellent photo to complement your artwork.
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A very well-written haiga. The oldest rose bush blooms with the mist beautiful moist blossoms ready to enjoyed by the onlookers. An excellent photo to complement your artwork.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from flower4880
It's a nice statement written under a beautiful photo but I would not call this a poem, I would call it a thought. For a thought you did a very good job.
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It's a nice statement written under a beautiful photo but I would not call this a poem, I would call it a thought. For a thought you did a very good job.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from rspoet
Ah, leave it to mikey
I'm sure the bees are ready
to pollinate, no age discrimination in nature
Excellent haiga, with moist lavender font
Well done
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Ah, leave it to mikey
I'm sure the bees are ready
to pollinate, no age discrimination in nature
Excellent haiga, with moist lavender font
Well done
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from mel1to7
I really don't know how to answer this.I know rose bushes have moist blossoms but I don't know if the oldest ones would.I have two rosebushes in my yard but to be honest I don't take real good care of mine so they don't live to grow old. The picture is beautiful,real roses are beautiful also. I am curious why you wrote oldest instead of just rose bushes or even why not just rose blossoms? Other than what I have written I think you are a good writer and I am ready to see rose blossoms burst forth anytime and any rose.
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I really don't know how to answer this.I know rose bushes have moist blossoms but I don't know if the oldest ones would.I have two rosebushes in my yard but to be honest I don't take real good care of mine so they don't live to grow old. The picture is beautiful,real roses are beautiful also. I am curious why you wrote oldest instead of just rose bushes or even why not just rose blossoms? Other than what I have written I think you are a good writer and I am ready to see rose blossoms burst forth anytime and any rose.
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Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from Mustang Patty
I'm so looking forward to the roses coming into bloom this year. We moved back to the Portland, OR area, and the parks will be filled with roses come May and June. Your poem made my heart burst with joy. Thank you for sharing this well penned piece,
~patty~
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I'm so looking forward to the roses coming into bloom this year. We moved back to the Portland, OR area, and the parks will be filled with roses come May and June. Your poem made my heart burst with joy. Thank you for sharing this well penned piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from dmt1967
This is another good poem. I like the way the flowers seem to come off the page because the background is black. I also like the scene this poem sets. Thank you for sharing this poem.
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This is another good poem. I like the way the flowers seem to come off the page because the background is black. I also like the scene this poem sets. Thank you for sharing this poem.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
Comment from marybell1
What a lovely photo of my favourite - roses. My father use to grow roses to supply the local florist, so I grew up with the beautiful scent of roses.-Just beautiful.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
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What a lovely photo of my favourite - roses. My father use to grow roses to supply the local florist, so I grew up with the beautiful scent of roses.-Just beautiful.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 06-Mar-2017
