Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written haiku. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. No you didn't need a picture with these words. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Teri, for your kind review and comments for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the imagery in the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

lol! That's a cute haiku. Robins are very vocal birds but I haven't seen them congregate much like the crows or starlings. Hooray for the lawn to get some thatching done.

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thanks for this great review for my spring haiku, lyenochka. Right after a rain or while the dew is still present on the grass, the robins will gather to dig for the worms that come up with the wetness. Not a huge group of them, but enough to have a lawn party. LOL
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from mountainwriter49

Exceptional

Good Evening, Kar,

You've nailed this one perfectly! Minimalist. Captures an observable moment in time. Present tense. Excellent word economy and effectiveness. A perfect satori! In fact, seeing the phrase, 'lawn party' reminded me of when I was young and in full hue, though quite innocent while in the fraternity, and how we'd go to State for the annual spring lawn party at the RO chapter. LOL.

A superb entry for the book.
Ray

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thanks, PM, for this wonderfully encouraging review for my spring haiku. I appreciate your comments, and I'm pleased you enjoyed the imagery and the aha line. Thanks so much for the extra star!
Smiles,
Kar :-)

Comment from Heidi M

Excellent

Oh, yum! A worm omelet! The idea of robins having a lawn party is cute. They were out in full force in our backyard this morning. Nicely done!

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Heidi, for this great review and your kind response for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem and the idea of them being at a lawn party. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

That was an adorable haiku.
Lawn party! I love it! Well written,
Have a great weekend!!!!~~~~~~~
~~~~~~~~~Kerry~~~~~~~~~~~~~

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Kerry, for this great review and your kind response for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem and the idea of them being at a lawn party. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 09-Mar-2017

Your welcome, It was cute:)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Yes I enjoyed this it indeed made me smile a great haiku with good colour choice for presentation and a beautiful scene painted well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Jill, for this great review and your kind response for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem, f it made you smile, I couldn't ask for a better compliment. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from w.j.debi

Excellent

This creates a nice image of spring. So the robins gather and have such fun as they enjoy their breakfast in the early morning. You set up the poem well and have a nice closing line to bring it home. Great job. I hope they choose your poem for the book,

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you for this great review and your kind response for my spring haiku, w.j.debi. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem and thanks for mentioning you liked the lawn party. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Well done, Indy. It all fits. Robins on the lawn...oh, how I long to see that right now. LOL. Very well done poem for the challenge, my friend. You always were very clever in your writing poems too. Blessings, Bob

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 Comment Written 04-Mar-2017

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reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017

Thank you, Bob, for this great review and your kind response for my spring haiku. I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem and thanks for your kind compliment. I love the robins and their wonderful song. It's a definite arrival of spring to me.
Smiles,
Indy :-)