Picture This
Viewing comments for Chapter 31 "A Fairy Story"poems from Picture This Challenge
37 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written my friend I loved the way you turned it around in the closing it reads smoothly well done I think you earned your rest regards Jill
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Yes this is well written my friend I loved the way you turned it around in the closing it reads smoothly well done I think you earned your rest regards Jill
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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LOL, thank you, Jill! I am getting so many things wrong at the moment, but I get there in the end. I'm glad you liked this one. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ella25
It is a very captivating story of a dreadful queen. Is it all she could see was "Me." Her selfish ways made people suffer and killed the king at the end. The poem is very thrilling, fabulous. Unfortunate ending fairy tale. Sending you a cup of love so you can feel much better. Ella
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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It is a very captivating story of a dreadful queen. Is it all she could see was "Me." Her selfish ways made people suffer and killed the king at the end. The poem is very thrilling, fabulous. Unfortunate ending fairy tale. Sending you a cup of love so you can feel much better. Ella
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, Ella, that cup of love did the trick! LOL. Thanks for the fun review, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
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You are welcome, Sandra. Hope you feel better. Ella
Comment from Ric Myworld
Not every fairy tale experience in life closes with a happy ending, only those staged as feel-good food for the mind. Put good and bad in a burlap sack, that is if you can find one, and when you shake it up and pull one out, you'll be stuck with what the future brings. Great job. :-)
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Not every fairy tale experience in life closes with a happy ending, only those staged as feel-good food for the mind. Put good and bad in a burlap sack, that is if you can find one, and when you shake it up and pull one out, you'll be stuck with what the future brings. Great job. :-)
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thanks Ric, Not many do, when you really read the fairy stories, most of them are quite frightening! Witches that eat little children!! Goodness me, mine is tame by comparison, LOL!! Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Oh Sandra, you are exhausted. I'm so sorry, but I don't blame you. A fabulous poem with a great story, well a fairy tale within. But a dark one mind you. I absolutely loved it. A hug. Ulla xxxx
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Oh Sandra, you are exhausted. I'm so sorry, but I don't blame you. A fabulous poem with a great story, well a fairy tale within. But a dark one mind you. I absolutely loved it. A hug. Ulla xxxx
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you, Dear Ulla, I'm fine, just that my brain goes missing sometimes! LOL. Thank you for reading this one and the lovely review you gave it. You are such a lovely friend. :) Sandra xxxx
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I love your writing, I hope you know. xxx
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Bless your heart, my dear friend. xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
My dear I am so glad you found the right picture and made this absolutely enthralling piece and no less than a six goes to this wonderfully done poem for the challange
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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My dear I am so glad you found the right picture and made this absolutely enthralling piece and no less than a six goes to this wonderfully done poem for the challange
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Wow, thank you so much, Barb! What a lovely review and thank you and a big hug for the 6 stars!!!! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment from RGstar
Just my cup of tea, Sandra. I love fantasy, story, in anything. I have a part of me that remains the child. As usual, you have a knack for story telling.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RG
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Just my cup of tea, Sandra. I love fantasy, story, in anything. I have a part of me that remains the child. As usual, you have a knack for story telling.
Nicely done.
My best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, RG, I'm so pleased you liked it. My fairy story would be right up my grandchildren's street! LOL :) Sandra xxx
Comment from nancy_e_davis
This is a wonderful poem Sandra. You certainly captured the story from the picture. Did I say that right? No matter. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Good luck my friend
A six for you. Nancy
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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This is a wonderful poem Sandra. You certainly captured the story from the picture. Did I say that right? No matter. You did a wonderful job with this challenge. Good luck my friend
A six for you. Nancy
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you, my wonderful friend! I wrote another one before this and it was the wrong picture! LOL. Thank you so much for the 6 stars, Nancy, I'm sending you a great big hug!! :) Sandra xxx
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I know. I think I sixed you on that one too, but after all there are very few good poets left. LOL I have been having sixes left over.
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Yes, you did, my goodness! Thanks my friend. xxxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
This is brilliant, Sandra - you at your
best, in my opinion - such a tale of woe
that's beautifully presented - the words
flowing smoothly throughout.
I did trip on this line tho:
he smiled, and then he said these words, much to the queen's surprise.- perhaps-
he smiled, then said these words, much to the ................. What do you think? Just ignore if not in agreement.
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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This is brilliant, Sandra - you at your
best, in my opinion - such a tale of woe
that's beautifully presented - the words
flowing smoothly throughout.
I did trip on this line tho:
he smiled, and then he said these words, much to the queen's surprise.- perhaps-
he smiled, then said these words, much to the ................. What do you think? Just ignore if not in agreement.
Margaret
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Thank you so much, Margaret for those lovely 6 stars. My husband said the same thing about that line, so I'll take another look and take your words with me. Thank you for that, I'm really pleased you said something. (I am not telling my husband though!! ) Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Selina Stambi
I love, love, love when you set your hand to poetry, Sandra.
There's always a charming old fashioned feel to your lines - the traditional stuff I was raised with. Good rhyme and nice, steady metre.
Good work, my friend.
Big hugs and wide smiles, xx
Sonali
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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I love, love, love when you set your hand to poetry, Sandra.
There's always a charming old fashioned feel to your lines - the traditional stuff I was raised with. Good rhyme and nice, steady metre.
Good work, my friend.
Big hugs and wide smiles, xx
Sonali
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Aww, thank you, Sonali, what a lovely thing to say! If you were nearby, I'd give you a big hug!! Thank you so very much for the 6 stars, I have a 'wide' smile now! LOL.
Bigger hugs back, dear friend. :) xxxxx Sandra xxxx
Comment from damommy
This is exceptional, even for you!
It was so easy to follow the story without having to figure it out. The rhyme and meter were perfect.
An evil fairy tale. Eeeek!
Great job.
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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This is exceptional, even for you!
It was so easy to follow the story without having to figure it out. The rhyme and meter were perfect.
An evil fairy tale. Eeeek!
Great job.
Comment Written 01-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017
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Aww, you are such a love, thank you, Yvonne, what a wonderful review. I love that you liked it that much. thank you so very much for the 6 stars, dear friend. Biggest hugs! :) Sandra xxx
