Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

Most of the Haiku writers are on Spring now. It's nice to get the change of season that your poem offers. Very well written. An excellent example of Haiku.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Yeah, I'm a chapter behind in these haiku posts, Thomas...story of my life. LOL Tonight there has been thunderstorms and tornado warnings, so I don't know if I'm in winter or spring.

Thanks for your review and comments. I truly appreciate your kind words.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

winter blizzard
isolates mountain cabin
wish we were there

What? No picture? And how do you think I'm supposed to SEE this poem in all it's glory? Oh yeah - 'cause you described it sooo well! HAHAHA! Beautiful job!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

LOL you're so funny, Robyn! I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku. Thamks for making me laugh.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I would absolutely LOVE this!!! So long as the freezer was stocked, ha ha. This has no need of a picture, the words paint quite easily, themselves. Beautiful, blessings...

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for your kind review, Irish Rain. It's been a longtime wish for me, and YES there has to be food and beverages stranded, too. Thank you for your wonderful words.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Irish Rain on 28-Feb-2017

You're most welcome!!!

Comment from sue133

Excellent

I miss the English snow. Your poem brought it all back. Big dumps of it, icy wind on the face and silence. A great Haiku. Congratulations. Susan

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you, Susan. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mrs Happy Poet

Excellent

Oh yes wish we were there that made me smile so much imagery in this piece well done no art work needed you are right there made me feel cold thinking about it well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you, Jill. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku. I always like to read your comments.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

Me too, Karyn :) I can relate to your fantasies....and add more.
I can feel the coldness of blizzard and warmth of the fireplace just by reading this beautiful poem...of course on the bearskin rug :) it has to be. Well done, my friend. With love, Ella

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you, Ella. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku. It's been a longtime wish for me...maybe someday!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Ella25 on 28-Feb-2017

You are welcome, Karyn. Please check OwnersDirect online. Sometimes they have great deals, and you might find a cabin in the woods. With love, Ella

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks! That would be so great! Now, I just have to find someone to love who'd want to go with me! :-)

reply by Ella25 on 28-Feb-2017

You made me laugh... :0) Well, winter is almost over so I am sure there will be someone for the next.

Comment from Antoine Charlemaine

Excellent

Well, Kazz-girl...!

I know just why you didn't use a photo...if you'd used a photo you would have needed an 18+ rating... As you say, some things are best left to the imagination...

The bearskin rug is optional? You disappoint me...

Nice post. I'm constantly amazed at the ease with which you conjure up such strong desires and emotions with just a few small words. You are a master. I think every reader will also "wish we were there". I know I do...

Sounds nicer than a dusty bedouin's tent...

Wistful Ant xx

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Hi Wistful AntMan! Oh yeah, being stranded in a mountain cabin with all the needed goodiesv away from the troubles of the world would be so much better than getting sand in me knickers. LOL

I've had this fantasy for a long time, and believe me ... if there was a bearskin rug in front of the fireplace, it sure wouldn't make me leave! But I have to find a cabin with a jacuzzi outside on the back deck...an integral part of the fantasy I insist on having.

Thank you, Ant, for your encouraging comments for my short poetry forms. I'm truly pleased you like them, and hope you're not sick of reading them. Your wishing you were there is the best compliment the poem could receive from a reader. I thamk you for that.

Thanks for your review, for making me laugh, and making me blush...it felt good. LOL
Smiles,
Kazzgirl :-)

reply by Antoine Charlemaine on 01-Mar-2017

I knew you'd try to get out of our coffee date in Northern Sudan...humph! But you're right...ice in knickers would be far more...er...sensory than sand in knickers.
A jacuzzi out the back...conjures instant images of the movie 'Mouse Hunt'. I'm guessing an ending like that would NOT be part of your fantasy. So, you're a ''wallow lazily in the hot tub followed by naked romp in the snow" type of girl. Must be the Scandinavian coming out in you...
Tired of your hair-dos? It's the least I can do for you, considering your patience with me. The pleasure is all mine.
I'm pleased that I could make you 'feel good'. The feeling is mutual...
xx

Comment from humpwhistle

Exceptional

Do I get to choose half the movies?
Vodka and wine?


I think I get this. I hate nuisance snow. But I like the big ones.
I want an event, not an inconvenience.
I don't have a fireplace. But if you have a place in mind,
I'll do a snow dance.

Peace, Lee

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2017

Hell, you can choose all the movies, hw! LOL. Thamks for your awesome review, shiny extra star, and your always great comments. You do get this...nuisance snow vs a snow event. A good reason to be stranded by winter and not care.

I've had this fantasy for decades and don't think I'll ever stop hoping to live it. I'm such a mushy optimistic dreamer.

Thanksiiio for your review, and please feel free to do your snow dance...I'd love to watch.
Smiles,
Indy :-)

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

I could see the scene in my mind. Thanks for a nice write. May you have a wonderful week filled with joys overflowing. Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you, Patricia. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from emptypage

Excellent

Ah...yeah....

Been stranded, but alone, in a house with three dogs and no heat. NOT the same. But with a loved one? Or ones? With heat? Give it to me!

Beautifully written. Has me longing.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you, Emptypage. I truly appreciate your taking the time to read and share your thoughts for my winter haiku. You're so right...definitely not the same. LOL
Smiles,
Karyn :-)