Doctor Carol
A party for Blondie41 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Yes, it is the simple joys of life that we remember the most. This is a delightful feline tale. I like the idea of having a birthday party for the kittens. I also admire your sister who was a nurse, I am a nurse too.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Yes, it is the simple joys of life that we remember the most. This is a delightful feline tale. I like the idea of having a birthday party for the kittens. I also admire your sister who was a nurse, I am a nurse too.
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you. Carol was forever taking care of something or someone. It became her whole life. I love her dearly.
Comment from fafa
Your history flows well and generates good adequacy to the context of the contest, it is of hoping that you should be fine in this type of situation, it makes me happy that you have shared it, a big one embraced and congratulations
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Your history flows well and generates good adequacy to the context of the contest, it is of hoping that you should be fine in this type of situation, it makes me happy that you have shared it, a big one embraced and congratulations
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. So glad you enjoyed the story.
Comment from ciliverde
What a cute story, I can imagine your excitement about the new kittens. I did wonder why your sister was "Doctor" Carol, but you explained that in your notes. Isn't it fun to carry memories like that for such a long time? Loved the old photo too,
Carol (not a doctor, lol)
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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What a cute story, I can imagine your excitement about the new kittens. I did wonder why your sister was "Doctor" Carol, but you explained that in your notes. Isn't it fun to carry memories like that for such a long time? Loved the old photo too,
Carol (not a doctor, lol)
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. My sister was always doing funny things like the cat christening. I love her dearly.
Comment from alvina224224
What an excellent entry for this contest. I too, could write a book with 'I remember' as the opening words of each chapter. I remember when the doodle-bug bomb dropped on our school. I remember when my sister picked up a can from the dung pit to throw at the invading boys. She raised it over her head- and dung poured all over her. Memories are wonderful. Good writing, and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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What an excellent entry for this contest. I too, could write a book with 'I remember' as the opening words of each chapter. I remember when the doodle-bug bomb dropped on our school. I remember when my sister picked up a can from the dung pit to throw at the invading boys. She raised it over her head- and dung poured all over her. Memories are wonderful. Good writing, and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. I think we all could write a book starting with "I Remember"
Comment from Mabaker
Sixty-five years ago things were simple and because we didn't get many small pleasures those that we did, were remembered for years after. I was raised in an Orphanage and one Easter I was ten or eleven a parcel came from my parents. It was an Easter egg surrounded with chocolates. To this day sixty-odd years later I can still remember the smell of those chocolates. Sincerely Anne
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Sixty-five years ago things were simple and because we didn't get many small pleasures those that we did, were remembered for years after. I was raised in an Orphanage and one Easter I was ten or eleven a parcel came from my parents. It was an Easter egg surrounded with chocolates. To this day sixty-odd years later I can still remember the smell of those chocolates. Sincerely Anne
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you. Why were you in an orphanage? I know it's none of my business, but I'm curious when you said you had parents.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A wonderful entry for the competition with genuine memories which still bring joy to you all these years later, happy times and a joy to read, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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A wonderful entry for the competition with genuine memories which still bring joy to you all these years later, happy times and a joy to read, love Dolly x
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thanks for reading and commenting. I always appreciate remarks on my writing.
Comment from Caressa_08
Wish I had a six to give this wonderful story from your past, though such a nice memory with a photograph of a cute you & I think your brother...That these simple things of life, in a child's mind are very important and for a special invitation that a Dr. Carol thought to mail to you, a small child then, made it so special it does seem being that she recognized how someone your age would just love to go to a barn cat's kittens christening and know it must of meant the world to you then to be considered to attend such an exciting event for a little girl.
Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Wish I had a six to give this wonderful story from your past, though such a nice memory with a photograph of a cute you & I think your brother...That these simple things of life, in a child's mind are very important and for a special invitation that a Dr. Carol thought to mail to you, a small child then, made it so special it does seem being that she recognized how someone your age would just love to go to a barn cat's kittens christening and know it must of meant the world to you then to be considered to attend such an exciting event for a little girl.
Thanks for sharing...Caressa_08
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you. My older sister was always doing things like the note. She has forever been more family oriented than the rest of us. I love her dearly.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
A great contest entry. You're right, the little things are what children remember and we hang on to as we grow older. Nice thoughts.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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A great contest entry. You're right, the little things are what children remember and we hang on to as we grow older. Nice thoughts.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you. I never forgot that long ago incident. It meant so much to me then and now.
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
This is a finely written piece and a treasured memory to have. It certainly is peculiar what stays and what goes...
because it says doctor on the front of It." - don't need the capitalisation on the final it.
All the best
GMG
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Hi there,
This is a finely written piece and a treasured memory to have. It certainly is peculiar what stays and what goes...
because it says doctor on the front of It." - don't need the capitalisation on the final it.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thanks, I can always count on you for help with these things. Glad you liked the story.
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I enjoyed this story. I would have always remembered a party for the cat and kittens also. I can imagine how special the event was. well done.
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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A well-written contest entry. I enjoyed this story. I would have always remembered a party for the cat and kittens also. I can imagine how special the event was. well done.
Comment Written 02-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 02-Mar-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting. Maybe this is one reason I'm a crazy cat person now. LOL
