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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "That Little Piece "poems from Picture This Challenge
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Comment from ronnie k
Thank you for the great write, wow mother wit, I believe in giving you a puzzle year after year mother was building an adult that would find life's, twist and turns a lot easier, you rule MAMA
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the great write, wow mother wit, I believe in giving you a puzzle year after year mother was building an adult that would find life's, twist and turns a lot easier, you rule MAMA
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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She certainly did, Ronnie, and I miss her laughter and wisdom. Bless you, my friend, for this lovely review. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from damommy
What a wonderful attitude you have about life. It will carry you through the hard times.
Nothing beats positive thinking. I know you have things to deal with, but feel sure you're up to it. Keep thinking happy thoughts.
"With tongue jammed tight between my teeth" - I've done this all my life, and my sons do, too. Best way to concentrate. LOL
"So if an opportunity comes knocking on your door,It might just be that little piece that you've been looking for." We never know, do we?
Great poem!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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What a wonderful attitude you have about life. It will carry you through the hard times.
Nothing beats positive thinking. I know you have things to deal with, but feel sure you're up to it. Keep thinking happy thoughts.
"With tongue jammed tight between my teeth" - I've done this all my life, and my sons do, too. Best way to concentrate. LOL
"So if an opportunity comes knocking on your door,It might just be that little piece that you've been looking for." We never know, do we?
Great poem!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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I do that, lol, thank you so much, Yvonne, for those 6 lovely stars, and for your lovely review. You are a lovely friend. :) xxx Sandra
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Very nice! I like how your poem tells a story. It's a simple story but very enjoyable to read. The poem was very enjoyable to read.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Very nice! I like how your poem tells a story. It's a simple story but very enjoyable to read. The poem was very enjoyable to read.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, Michael, I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. :) Sandra xx
Comment from patcelaw
Sandra, I did enjoy this poem and reminded e of a poem I wrote about puzzles.
Here is the poem.
He Stood Beside Me
Life seemed a puzzle that did not fit
And I couldn't make much sense of it,
That's when I told Jesus I'd made a mess
And asked if He would come and bless.
As I looked into His kind face,
He put all the pieces in their place.
He stood beside me and dropped them in
Where shortly before there had only been sin.
Now I can rest in His love and grace,
And looked up so I'd see his kind face.
-Patricia Lawrence
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Sandra, I did enjoy this poem and reminded e of a poem I wrote about puzzles.
Here is the poem.
He Stood Beside Me
Life seemed a puzzle that did not fit
And I couldn't make much sense of it,
That's when I told Jesus I'd made a mess
And asked if He would come and bless.
As I looked into His kind face,
He put all the pieces in their place.
He stood beside me and dropped them in
Where shortly before there had only been sin.
Now I can rest in His love and grace,
And looked up so I'd see his kind face.
-Patricia Lawrence
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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What a lovely poem, Patricia, that would have been a wonderful take on this Picture This Challenge. Thank you so much for the lovely review of mine, my friend. I'm glad you liked it. xsx Sandra
Comment from Mustang Patty
The poem is so beautiful and with such a deep meaning, I felt goosebumps when I finished it. The rhymes and rhythm flow smoothly, and I truly feel it is a wonderful piece.
Thank you for sharing this well penned poem,
~patty~
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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The poem is so beautiful and with such a deep meaning, I felt goosebumps when I finished it. The rhymes and rhythm flow smoothly, and I truly feel it is a wonderful piece.
Thank you for sharing this well penned poem,
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you so very much for the lovely 6 stars and wonderful review, Patty! I'm so pleased you enjoyed my take on the picture. Your review is lovely. :) xxx Sandra
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Sandra - another very philosophical poem from you. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Good message within the poem - I shall take your mum's advice and try some patience and persistence - but not with a jigsaw puzzle, can't bear them. I'm hooked on Sudoco. My favourite line is 'I thumped and pushed but in the end I just went out to play.' - that's exactly what I'd have done. LOL. A very well written poem as would be expected from you. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Hi Sandra - another very philosophical poem from you. Well written with good rhyme and meter. Good message within the poem - I shall take your mum's advice and try some patience and persistence - but not with a jigsaw puzzle, can't bear them. I'm hooked on Sudoco. My favourite line is 'I thumped and pushed but in the end I just went out to play.' - that's exactly what I'd have done. LOL. A very well written poem as would be expected from you. Warm regards Dorothy xxx
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Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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I know, I don't know what's come over me, Dorothy! LOL. Thank you, my friend, for your lovely review, I was never that good with the jig-saw puzzles either. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
