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poems from Picture This Challenge

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Comment from Ella25
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It is a great poem, Sandra. Beautiful message of patience and perseverance leading to peace and more fulfilling life. Like a missing puzzle piece and when we find it, it thrills us. Excellently expressed words in each stanza. With love, Ella

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Thank you, Dear Ella, for your lovely review. I do so appreciate your words. Big hugs. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Sandra. I loved your poem, but I don't believe that this is the image for this post. Nevertheless, a terrific upbeat poem with a great message. Very nice rhyming and flow. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    No, I've just found that out, Marilyn! I don't know where it came from now, lol!! I've taken that out of my title now and found the one I should have had! :( Now I have to do another one. Thank you for your nice review on this one, my friend. You'll see another soon!!! LOL. :) Sandra xx
reply by BeasPeas on 28-Feb-2017
    OK. I'll be on the lookout for it. I do like the puzzle pieces, though. I'm a big fan of puzzles. Marilyn
Comment from Selina Stambi
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What a lovely message, Sandra!

Good rhyme and metre too.

Love your poems, my friend. They always make me think.

Hugs and kisses,

xx

Sonali :)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Thank you my dear friend. I am slowly getting back into my poetry, I quite missed writing them while I was writing my novel. I'm really pleased you enjoy them, you are so nice. :) Biggest hugs. xxxx Sandra xxxx
Comment from Ben Colder
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Excellent. Now, this is real poetry in my opinion. A great message shared to all. Thanks, Sandy, many of us needed this. LOL. Well done.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Aww, bless your heart, Ben, thank you so much for this lovely review, your words put a big smile on my face. The 6 stars are the icing on the cake, thank you!! Biggest hugs, my friend. Sandy. xxxx
Comment from barbara.wilkey
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The third stanza is absolutely perfect. It's filled with wisdom and insight for all who read. You did a wonderful job writing this poem Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Thank you so much for your lovely thoughts on my poem, Barbara! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it. Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Loren (7)
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I enjoyed this in that it was not too "fluffy" in what it was talking about, It gave one pause to reflect and nod their head that yes, life is a puzzle at time. Yet, the ultimate picture is there, if we don't try too hard to press the pieces in where they may not belong and ruin the entire thing of end up with rather ratty and frayed edges. Loren

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    That's exactly right, Loren. I'm so pleased you liked my poem, thank you so much for your lovely review! :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Janet Foor
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What sage advice your mother gave you. A lovely poem describing a puzzle and the last two lines put those pieces together and made them fit perfectly.

Well done Sandra.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Aw, thank you, Janet. I'm so pleased you liked this one. I miss mums words of wisdom, but she taught me well. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from June Sargent
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Not only a cute poem, but a life lesson! Loved the conclusion with opportunity knocking on your door - it just might be what you're looking for. I think you met the challenge well. Enjoyed the read.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Thank you so much, June, for your lovely review. I'm so pleased you liked it. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Aussie
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Loved your entry for Picture Challenge. It was a perfect choice for the contest. Life is just like a jigsaw puzzle, sometimes we fine that elusive missing piece, sometimes we have to walk away until the next day. Much like "a watched pot never boils." Thanks for sharing XXK

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
    Thank you so much, my dear friend. I'm so pleased the message came across the way I wanted it too. Biggest hugs for those lovely 6 stars. Did you get my reply e-mail alright? Much love my friend. :) Sandra xxx
reply by Aussie on 02-Mar-2017
    Yep, and how is your headache? XXK
Comment from Ric Myworld
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Thanks for sharing another of your fine poems that offers us a look that should put us all to watching, thinking, and understanding everything is not what or as it seems. We just need to examine every little piece of everything, until we can make the pieces fit for us. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
    Thank you again, Ric, for yet another of your wonderful reviews. I really appreciate you, my friend. I'm really pleased you enjoyed my take on the picture. :) Sandra xxx