Comment from Rasmine

Exceptional

Okay, I give you a six because of your presentation and zen full poem (tried to use zenful, but Grammarly says it's not a word. I argued that it was poetic license, but that doesn't always work. LOL

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Exceptional

Hello, Dean,

I love everything about this traditional haiku. It's a beautiful masterpiece. All about is perfect, the carefully chosen font, (- italicized Lucinda-- it looks like the breeze is vending the branches) the beautiful music, the words...everything! Well done, sweetie pie.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

WE are heading for Autumn in Australia starting next week The spring blossoms are over yet Autumn still gives me a zenful feeling I must say

thanks for posting

dip

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017

All seasons have their advantages, Dip.
Autumn just happens to be my favorite.
But this weeks challenge was about spring, so you just gotta go with the flow, ya know?
Thanks for reading!
~Deano :)

Comment from bookishfabler

Excellent

The words are very pretty. It definitely feels like spring. The warm air on your face and the small buds on the trees, pale green appearing almost overnight. It does give you a zenful feeling.
hugs Heidi

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 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017

Thanks very much for reading my haiku, Heidi.
I'm very grateful for your comments.
Be well...
~Dean