Comment from winnona

Excellent

A very well-written haiku club challenge poem. The words combined easily giving the reader an image of early spring. The artwork and music completed the piece well.

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you.

Comment from rama devi

Excellent

Zenful pleasures! love it! Great satori. Lovely zephyr like imagery. Felt like a poetic caress with all those phonetic B and P sound medleys. Thank you. Six stars if I had one.

Warmly, rd

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks so much, rd. I'm really glad that you not only "get this", but that you enjoyed it as well.
Thanks so much for sharing your insights and observations with me on this haiku.
Love and light, my friend.
~Dean :-))

reply by rama devi on 28-Feb-2017

:-)))) Love, light and *smiles*

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

reply by rama devi on 28-Feb-2017

:-)))

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

AND HERE I THOUGHT YOU ACTUALLY WANTED TO SAY SINFUL NOT ZENFUL LOL
GREAT ALLITERATION, GREAT IMAGERY AND I LOVE THE WAY THE BRANCHES FELL.

LULUBE

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Moi?
Au contraire, mon ami.
Thanks a bunch for reading, Lulube.
~Dean :)

reply by Lulube on 07-Mar-2017

lol welcome

lulube

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

Love the gentle spring sounding rhythm, flute, and water.
Even without the sound effects, one can 'feel' the coming of spring in this haiku.
Very gentle, and very calming to read
Love it

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, LaRosa, and for your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

reply by LaRosa on 28-Feb-2017

Dios Le Bendiga

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Muchas gracias.
~Deacno ;)

reply by LaRosa on 28-Feb-2017

de nada!

Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hello Dean, A timely springtime haiku with good imagery. I can see it; I can feel it. Good alliteration: brush bare branches. I especially liked:

zenful pleasures
(Indeed)

Great complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read.
Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, Margaret, and for your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

Comment from barbara.wilkey

Excellent

You presented us with a perfect package, artwork, sound effects/music, and Haiku. Your talent shines through loud and clear. You did a wonderful job with this.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, Barbara, and for your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

This one has the feel of the old masters for me. I could see Basho writing this. It is technically sound and it gives me a peaceful feeling. Good choice of music

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, Doug, and for sharing your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Dean,

What a lovely and relaxing piece. The B alliteration is a beautiful touch, flowing from line one to line two. This is truly delightful and relaxing, as a haiku should be. Excellent work.

Thanks for sharing!

Kim

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, Kim, and for sharing your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

Comment from Lu Saluna

Excellent

Very pretty, I like this haiku.
bare branches not for long. blossoms coming soon.
I like the satori, very peaceful and calming.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks for reading my haiku, Lura, and for sharing your insights into this write as well.
I sincerely appreciate your time as well as your comments.
Vaya con Dios,

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting haiku you have penned about spring. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks, teri.
Vaya con Dios.