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Comment from nomi338
You have to watch out for these crusaders who feel it their appointed duty to indoctrinate the world with their concoctions and ideas. With success the world will one day filled with their converts, then they will be forced to rebel against the rebels for nothing in life remains the same for long.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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You have to watch out for these crusaders who feel it their appointed duty to indoctrinate the world with their concoctions and ideas. With success the world will one day filled with their converts, then they will be forced to rebel against the rebels for nothing in life remains the same for long.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thank you, nomi, for the response. Bill
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, it all started somewhere there between Euphrates and Tigris. But how could it end in the mindless killings we see today? Well, I suppose that deep down I know the answer. They've always been fanatics. It's only now they have the modern world to help them along. Abel an Cain springs to mind. Oh dear. I get carried away. And I'm not even religious. Wonderful poem. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Hi Bill, it all started somewhere there between Euphrates and Tigris. But how could it end in the mindless killings we see today? Well, I suppose that deep down I know the answer. They've always been fanatics. It's only now they have the modern world to help them along. Abel an Cain springs to mind. Oh dear. I get carried away. And I'm not even religious. Wonderful poem. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Ulla, for looking at this and commenting. Bill
Comment from Dean Kuch
Ah-ha!
Jumpin' Jihad, Bill.
So that's how it all started.
I just knew it had to have something to do with some braniac college student meddling around with things they ought not to be meddling around with.
Those braniac nerdy types are always a problem.
Thanks so much for confirming what I have suspected all along.
Now I can go and collect the $20.00 that Donald Trump owes me for the bet we made.
I'll split it wit'cha...
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Ah-ha!
Jumpin' Jihad, Bill.
So that's how it all started.
I just knew it had to have something to do with some braniac college student meddling around with things they ought not to be meddling around with.
Those braniac nerdy types are always a problem.
Thanks so much for confirming what I have suspected all along.
Now I can go and collect the $20.00 that Donald Trump owes me for the bet we made.
I'll split it wit'cha...
~Dean :)
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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He bet me as well to cover his losses. It's no wonder he's the president.
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Yeah, go figure, right?
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
Learning never ends; poet opens a good lesson on humanity, and tells how man changes, transforms, students turn Jihadis; a nice poem I liked and enjoyed the free flow of thoughts, fine diction, visual imagery and balanced rhymes.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Learning never ends; poet opens a good lesson on humanity, and tells how man changes, transforms, students turn Jihadis; a nice poem I liked and enjoyed the free flow of thoughts, fine diction, visual imagery and balanced rhymes.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, ALD, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from dmt1967
This poem made me chuckle, especially the end. I like the last verse being written in red and the theme about shooting up mankind as it was a nice touch. The whole poem made me laugh, though. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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This poem made me chuckle, especially the end. I like the last verse being written in red and the theme about shooting up mankind as it was a nice touch. The whole poem made me laugh, though. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, dmt, for looking at this and commenting. Bill
Comment from robyn corum
Bill,
Strange, this thing you write of. I allllmost didn't read it, because I thought it was something in a different language. *smile* Entertaining and fun - a little. haha!
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Bill,
Strange, this thing you write of. I allllmost didn't read it, because I thought it was something in a different language. *smile* Entertaining and fun - a little. haha!
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, robyn, for looking at this and commenting. Bill
Comment from ronnie k
Sounds like every thing that tastes good just want give the best results, I iked the humorous tone that conceal a very good warning, but careful of your likes they may be distasteful in the end.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Sounds like every thing that tastes good just want give the best results, I iked the humorous tone that conceal a very good warning, but careful of your likes they may be distasteful in the end.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Ronnie, for looking at this and commenting. Bill
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Bill - you always have me shaking my head at your ability to turn a rhyme even in this what seems a humorous piece, ends with a solid impact of life as it seems to have impacted with the results you describe. I thought you did a bang up job on this one - pun intended:)
Thanks for sharing.
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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Dear Bill - you always have me shaking my head at your ability to turn a rhyme even in this what seems a humorous piece, ends with a solid impact of life as it seems to have impacted with the results you describe. I thought you did a bang up job on this one - pun intended:)
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Maureen, for reviewing this. I have fun with these; that's what's important to me. Bill
