An aim in life
The mission11 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Waves, we only have one life to live...know your worth and live a good life...remember the wonderful things in your life...the ones already made...and the ones you are making...very well written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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HI Waves, we only have one life to live...know your worth and live a good life...remember the wonderful things in your life...the ones already made...and the ones you are making...very well written my sweet friend...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thanks again my sweet Linda You always make me feel good about my poetry.
dip
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that's because I love your poetry you...soooooooo welcome...xxoo love
Comment from Teri7
This is a very nice and encouraging poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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This is a very nice and encouraging poem you have penned my friend. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 03-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2017
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Thank you Teri much appreciated as always
dip
Comment from Susanjohn
Perfectly expressed dear Dipster! ...and a great message..we all should celebrate the life we have been given...feel good poem Dip
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Perfectly expressed dear Dipster! ...and a great message..we all should celebrate the life we have been given...feel good poem Dip
Comment Written 28-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017
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Thankyou Susan Always appreciate your reviews
dip
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello again my friend I am getting their slowly sometimes it does a person good to look back at there Lives and memories and realise what they have around them and their achievements throughout well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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Hello again my friend I am getting their slowly sometimes it does a person good to look back at there Lives and memories and realise what they have around them and their achievements throughout well done regards Jill
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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You are so right Jill thanks for review as always
dip
Comment from Mary Wakeford
So it is after midnight, well after midnight and if I read this aloud as your notes dictate, my husband would surely think I've lost it! This is a nice message with excellent rhyming qualities and a look-back attitude that we can all relate to and learn from.
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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So it is after midnight, well after midnight and if I read this aloud as your notes dictate, my husband would surely think I've lost it! This is a nice message with excellent rhyming qualities and a look-back attitude that we can all relate to and learn from.
Comment Written 27-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 27-Feb-2017
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ok Just whisper it lol
Thanks so much for your review as always
dip
Comment from Irish Rain
Love the wonderful advice in this Mr. Dip. Since I had my 2 heart attacks in 2015...I realize each day is the gift. And things I used to think necessary...are just things. I treasure each day. This is lovely, blessings...
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Love the wonderful advice in this Mr. Dip. Since I had my 2 heart attacks in 2015...I realize each day is the gift. And things I used to think necessary...are just things. I treasure each day. This is lovely, blessings...
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much Irish your comments mean a lot to me
there is a saying that goes something like "don't sweat the the small stuff" I have tried to live by this mantra every day.
You certainly would appreciate everyday Irish good on you
dip
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You're most welcome!!!
Comment from robyn corum
Embrace the day and all its wonder
You know you can, because it's free
Think you can sense the spell I'm under
and the hold this life has on me
Marvel at the Earth we live in
never take it all for granted
cherish this life we have within
a world that has us all enchanted
What marvelous lines and great reminders to enjoy the day while we can - and to gaze upon all the beautiful blessings our planet has to offer. So sweet!
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Embrace the day and all its wonder
You know you can, because it's free
Think you can sense the spell I'm under
and the hold this life has on me
Marvel at the Earth we live in
never take it all for granted
cherish this life we have within
a world that has us all enchanted
What marvelous lines and great reminders to enjoy the day while we can - and to gaze upon all the beautiful blessings our planet has to offer. So sweet!
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Oh Robyn you have made my day Thankyou so much. So glad you like it.
dip
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well, Dip, you not only 'played around' with some rhyme herein, IMO, you touched on some deep philosophical ideas, and right about now, I could use some positive thoughts! My people-tolerance is at a 'low'. LOL. (Time to get some kitty-snuggles.)(That is, if SHE'S in a good mood - Hahahahaha!)
VERY beautiful, my friend. I enjoyed it very much.
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Well, Dip, you not only 'played around' with some rhyme herein, IMO, you touched on some deep philosophical ideas, and right about now, I could use some positive thoughts! My people-tolerance is at a 'low'. LOL. (Time to get some kitty-snuggles.)(That is, if SHE'S in a good mood - Hahahahaha!)
VERY beautiful, my friend. I enjoyed it very much.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thankyou Dawn I really do appreciate your positive input It means a lot to me.
dip
goes like this...
You're my best friend;
though some pretend,
I'd break, not bend
...without you
You are so wise!
Some other guys
just criticize
...you lift me up
Your faith is strong
and when I'm wrong
your sweet heart-song
...forgives me
To face each day
and find my way,
I'll always pray
...you love me
That's as far as I got...more when I have written it...maybe I should just post it here. That way no one can put a damper on it. :))
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I'm putting it on my page. :) (It's finished.)
Comment from country ranch writer
Like is precious and should never be taken for granted.their is so much in life to see. The wildlife,birds, trees and all are free look around you and you will see what one takes for granted
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Like is precious and should never be taken for granted.their is so much in life to see. The wildlife,birds, trees and all are free look around you and you will see what one takes for granted
Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Thankyou Mom really appreciate your review hope everything is fine on the home front
dip
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Taking it one day at a time waiting on the doc.dad is going for iron infusions twice a week to build his blood count up.
Comment from Thal1959
Very nice, D. Actually flows fairly well. No problem with the rhymes or rhyme schemes. It has been fun to hear some poems that are a bit more philosophical regarding life, rather than the usual love poems.
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reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Very nice, D. Actually flows fairly well. No problem with the rhymes or rhyme schemes. It has been fun to hear some poems that are a bit more philosophical regarding life, rather than the usual love poems.
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Comment Written 26-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2017
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Yeah I know what you mean. I have deviated a bit here. I will get back on the love track again lol
thanks as always
grasshopper
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Not trying to egg you on a bit there, D. It is just that love and romance poems are not my favorite subject. But that's just me.
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fair enough
