Comment from heyjude

Excellent

IndianIrish, I like this haiku. That colts first steps are wobbly,
but he's having a great time out in the field playing and running.
What a wonderful picture to go along with it.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, heyjude, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. They're such fun to watch on their wobbly legs. But it doesn't take them long to get it right.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Karyn,

Another fabulous poem. You really have a knack for them! Have you had many pubbed since we did Pieces? I've had a few accepted in magazines here and there. Veer pleased!

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thanks, Robyn, for your review for my colt haiku. I've only had some published in Prune Juice, and I've been very honored to have some haiku of mine selected by an artist to be used on notecards and a 2017 calendar. I love the Japanese short poems ... reading and writing them.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by robyn corum on 24-Feb-2017

Awesome!

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Your haiku are always so lovely. I can feel the colt's light-heartedness in this. I keep studying these, but so far, my haiku's are a flop. So I doubly appreciate yours!! Blessings...

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, Irish Rain, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. I'd never written any Japanese short forms before I joined FanStory, and my first ones were horrible! But with the help of several talented teachers way back then, I learned to love reading and writing them. Thamks for reading and commenting on my haiku, Irish Rain.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Irish Rain on 24-Feb-2017

You are most welcome. I have trouble with haiku, senyru, tanka... but I'll continue to study them. One day I'll have my 'aha!' moment!!!

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

IndianaIrish, a very good brief haiku poem.
The picture attached allows the words to carry
further. The end line adds more cheekiness to
the scene. Great job. ~DD

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, ~DD, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. You always write encouraging reviews!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

Horses are surely things of beauty... I never tire of looking at them as they display themselves in all their splendor. Thanks for the great haiku. Wishing you the best.
Bill~

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank youfor taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku, Bill. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. I love to watch their wobbly legs take hold as they figure out how they work. Thamks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson

Excellent

Nicely done,the words went well together.
I thought it was a rather cute haiku.
Beautiful picture you chose as well.
Lots of luck to you.
- Kerry

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, Kerry, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 24-Feb-2017

Your welcome Karyn

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a delightfully worded haiku and presented beautifully. Keep writing and may your weekend be filled with joy and blessings. Patricia

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Patricia, thamk you for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

The picture is great showing the young horse unfettered and free. The words are a strong match in describing the action in the photo.

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku, mvbrooks. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)