Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Those first carefree, wobbly steps are such a wonderful delight. I've been enjoying them too with my one year old granddaughter visiting for a few weeks. Hence little time for FS!

 Comment Written 25-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Ahhhhh, I hope you have a glorious, memorable time with your little sweetie, Tony. Thank you for squeeIng in my haiku to read and review. Thank you for your kind response.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

I've seen several foals born, and I have to admit you are spot-on in your assessment of their gait, Karyn.
They most definitely are quite wobbly...at first.
However, it doesn't take them long before they're running right alongside of Momma.
Well done.
~Dean

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Thanks for your kind review and comments for my colt haiku, Dean. I love watching those first few moments on wobbly legs before they catch on how they work, and then they take off. They look so happy.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Dean Kuch on 25-Feb-2017

You're welcome.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Good verb choice with 'prances. Wobbly legs plants a picture. A colt would be carefree (assonance here). If it were older an observer would thing the mammal is drunk. :-)

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

LOL, Shari. Thanks for your kind review and comments for my colt haiku. I always appreciate your time spent on reviewing any of my writing. Thanks!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from apky

Good

This is so cute. Reminds me of myself here, attempting to prance with grace and elegance on my wobbly legs, yet so very free to jolly well romp!
Thanks!

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 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Thanks for the review, apky. I appreciate your time to read and share your comments.
Indy :-)

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

I have had so much fun and gratefully gotten a look in the construction of these works of three line tale thanks to my fan Lu, I plan to continue following the band even if I don't get too play.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

Thanks, Ronnie, for your review for my colt haiku. Glad you're having fun reading the haiku on FanStory.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Ella25

Excellent

What a happy moment......I am free and can romp. The grass is soft and green. It is a very cheerful haiku with bouncing words, my friend. Very well done. With love, Ella

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2017

So glad you enjoyed the bouncing words, Ella! I appreciate your kind and encouraging response to my colt haiku. I love to watch those wobbly legs soon change into prancing legs. They look so happy!
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by Ella25 on 25-Feb-2017

You are welcome, Karyn. Have a great weekend! With love, Ella

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a really cute haiku you have written about that sweet little colt! You described his actions so well! I love the colors you used also! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thanks, Teri, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. Hope you're well.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Excellent, Indy. I wish I had a six for this. It is perfect in every way. The satori is wonderful. You should have saved this for one of those haiku contests they run on here all the time. Thanks for sharing. Blessings. Bob

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thanks, Bob, for your review and feedback for my haiku. I've been posting in the haiku challenge for a possibility of being chosen to be included in a book that will be published. Thanks for your kind response, Bob.
Smiles,
Indy :-)

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

The pic fits perfectly with your words. There is a happy feeling in your poem as I see the colt on a carefree romp. Your lines connect together well and a clear picture is created.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, mermaids, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi IndianaIrish.

Your poem is wonderful to read. The picture of the little colt running
is very nice too. It goes very well with your poem and it looks happy
to be running, probably for the first time.

Kat

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 24-Feb-2017

Thank you, Kat, for taking the time to read and write a review for my colt haiku. I appreciate your kind response, and I'm delighted you enjoyed the poem. I love watching colts after first born.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)

reply by MizKat on 25-Feb-2017

Your poem was wonderful and I loved to read it. Kat