Ode to Your Brain
Your brain has enormous potential.3 total reviews
Comment from TheWriteTeach
I like this piece. The enjambment flows well from line to line and provides a good mental image. For me, that is good because I like to 'see' what the poem says.
Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
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I like this piece. The enjambment flows well from line to line and provides a good mental image. For me, that is good because I like to 'see' what the poem says.
Nice job with this. Good luck in the contest.
Suzanne
Comment Written 25-Feb-2017
Comment from ronnie k
A profound write given to humor, I loved this structured write "Take good care ;;;;;;;you may need it some time. Humor given a moderate of good solid advice, thank you for sharing.
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A profound write given to humor, I loved this structured write "Take good care ;;;;;;;you may need it some time. Humor given a moderate of good solid advice, thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
Comment from kathleenspalding
Haha! Isn't that the truth! Great five seven five poem flows well and delivers a very true message. Gave me a laugh, too. Excellent choice of artwork.Good luck in the contest.
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Haha! Isn't that the truth! Great five seven five poem flows well and delivers a very true message. Gave me a laugh, too. Excellent choice of artwork.Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2017
