Vanity
Senryu 2-7-418 total reviews
Comment from brenda bickers
Hi Mikey,
this was so gross it made me laugh. Only you could come up with something like this and get away with it. What else is left to say except I'm off to go piss on the kitchen floor. lol
Well done.
Brenda:))x
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Hi Mikey,
this was so gross it made me laugh. Only you could come up with something like this and get away with it. What else is left to say except I'm off to go piss on the kitchen floor. lol
Well done.
Brenda:))x
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
Comment from tfawcus
Some women have self esteem that is that low, and what a tragedy it is. Your words draw the reader up short. Your presentation is superb. Your message tugs at the heart.
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Some women have self esteem that is that low, and what a tragedy it is. Your words draw the reader up short. Your presentation is superb. Your message tugs at the heart.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
Comment from Sis Cat
Wow, this is a strong senryu about the foible of vanity. I am reminded of the Greek myth of Narcissus and of the Mirror-mirror-on-the-wall evil queen of Snow White. You also use the sense of smell in you senryu which is rare.
Thank you for sharing your stark poem. I wish you success in the contest.
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Wow, this is a strong senryu about the foible of vanity. I am reminded of the Greek myth of Narcissus and of the Mirror-mirror-on-the-wall evil queen of Snow White. You also use the sense of smell in you senryu which is rare.
Thank you for sharing your stark poem. I wish you success in the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I like the formatting of this entry. It completed the poem very well. I think you have done well completing the challenge of the contest.
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A well-written contest entry. I like the formatting of this entry. It completed the poem very well. I think you have done well completing the challenge of the contest.
Comment Written 22-Feb-2017
Comment from Sankey
There you go being as gross as ever. Loved the wording and the artwork as always.I still can't get around these poem regulations. Still trying to run my biography through one more time. I forget if you saw the Introduction which was the newest bit. But I have edited the later chapters. Getting it all out for a final yeehaw before I see about publishing.
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There you go being as gross as ever. Loved the wording and the artwork as always.I still can't get around these poem regulations. Still trying to run my biography through one more time. I forget if you saw the Introduction which was the newest bit. But I have edited the later chapters. Getting it all out for a final yeehaw before I see about publishing.
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Michael,
I have $3.89 in my FS checking account. I am saving money fast! I want to enter your contest so I am reviewing like crazy ... something I hate to do. :/
Take care,
Gypsy
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Hello, Michael,
I have $3.89 in my FS checking account. I am saving money fast! I want to enter your contest so I am reviewing like crazy ... something I hate to do. :/
Take care,
Gypsy
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
Comment from Sasha
I honestly do not know where to begin. This is awesome, imaginative, clever, and brilliantly written. Stunning illustration that perfectly conveys the message of this superb poem. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. As I said, this is just brilliant.
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I honestly do not know where to begin. This is awesome, imaginative, clever, and brilliantly written. Stunning illustration that perfectly conveys the message of this superb poem. This is a terrific entry for this contest and I sincerely wish you all the best. As I said, this is just brilliant.
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
Comment from BOO ghost
Awe -- bro, seeking the scent of her reflection which is the yellow urine on the floor? disgusting sweet. Nice image up there. Has its own charm believe it or not. good luck in this contest! Found gold! BOO!
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Awe -- bro, seeking the scent of her reflection which is the yellow urine on the floor? disgusting sweet. Nice image up there. Has its own charm believe it or not. good luck in this contest! Found gold! BOO!
Comment Written 21-Feb-2017
