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Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Scene at a Used Car Lot"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
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Comment from royowen
I love the way you've delivered a very casual two-person, amusing and very pointed conversational script, coupled with a delightful colloquially presented conversation about a classical car Pons is thoughtfully considering acquiring, I like the way you've structured it to eventually lead to him talking himself out of it, with the persuasively negative friend, Ned. Well done, Bill, excellent script, with well designed, interesting, colloquially inclined language, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I love the way you've delivered a very casual two-person, amusing and very pointed conversational script, coupled with a delightful colloquially presented conversation about a classical car Pons is thoughtfully considering acquiring, I like the way you've structured it to eventually lead to him talking himself out of it, with the persuasively negative friend, Ned. Well done, Bill, excellent script, with well designed, interesting, colloquially inclined language, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you, Roy, for the encouraging and kind review. Bill
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Most welcome Bill,
Comment from Poetic Friend
This is hilarious, Bill. I love how you incorporated the dialect, which was done so well that I had to reread some of the sentences twice to understand the correct usage of the words.
If I am not mistaken, I think I read another script with these two characters. Do you have series of scripts using these characters?
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reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This is hilarious, Bill. I love how you incorporated the dialect, which was done so well that I had to reread some of the sentences twice to understand the correct usage of the words.
If I am not mistaken, I think I read another script with these two characters. Do you have series of scripts using these characters?
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Comment Written 20-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. Yes, Pons and Ned meet quite often. They are on my portfolio under scripts. There are four newer ones and eighteen more under the group title SCENES.
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I knew I had read stories about these two characters previously. They are memorable.
Unfortunately, I have such limited time to be on FanStory to read all the scripts. I am usually on the site on weekends (maybe twice a month). I am off work today for President's Day so I have an extra day to be on the site.
I am going to fanned you, so as time permits, I can keep up with your scripts.
I hope you are planning to submit the scripts somewhere (maybe SNL), for these characters are a hoot!
