Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

Lovely haiku!!! Breath-taking picture!! 'softly down on frosted ground'...that just SOUNDS so pretty! This is wonderful, blessings...

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Such a beautiful and descriptive Haiku Ulla, I loved this and it is very effective given it's short length, so much meaning packed in liked a lot kindest regards, meia :) Well done x

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

What a pretty picture to accent your poem. Snow is beautiful, but only when you can stay inside by the fireplace and watch everyone else trudge through the mess. LOL! Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

I couldn't agree with you more, Ric. thanks for a great review. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from damommy

Excellent

What an unusual plant in the photo. I like it.

Is it hard for you to write about snow? I know it doesn't where you live.

I love the idea of softly falling flakes. You did a good job of creating the imagery.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Tessa Kay

Excellent

I suppose where you are, all you can do is dream of a snowy winter. Mind you, the Sierra Nevada has snow almost all year round, doesn't it?
Love the picture. Very delicate. :)

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

You did a good job on this one, my friend. I can see the snow falling - a sight I love. Good clear imagery in the first two line and a strong satori,

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from JP49

Excellent

I loved this. As I was reading I could feel the coldness and see the beauty of the snowflakes. Lovely choice of artwork. The haiku had a lovely flow and lots of description considering the amount of words. Well done.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very beautiful haiku you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This haiku about winter, Snowflakes Flutter, uses its fifteen syllables to remind us of the beauty of snow in small quantities. The stuff I have to shovel kills the mood.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

Hahahaha, Bill, I don't blame you. We don't have snow here at all, I'm glad to say, but I grew up in Denmark, so I know what you're saying. All romance disappears very quickly. Thanks for a great review. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from marybell1

Excellent

I enjoyed you poem of a snowflake. And you kept to the 4-7-3 syllables, though I prefer the original 5-7-5 myself. I also liked your photo.
Best of luck.
Marybell1.

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 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017