Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Ulla,

You're so right! All those snowflakes pile up and create a lush white carpet that IS a winter's dream. You've created a wonderful - chilly - image in just 14 syllables. Great job!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017

Hi Robyn, thanks so very much. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Benny Beeharry

Excellent

Hi friend, this is such a tender writing, and when t deals with snowflakes there is beauty and glow added on. This a very beautiful writing.
Danny Jock

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017

Thank you so much, Danny. I'm so pleased you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Sixty70

Excellent

Beautiful imagery here. I especially like the internal rhyme - down/ground - and the sibilance of the repeated 's' sounds, which is sometimes the sound of a soft snowfall.

I have to say that I would love for us to have some snow. I'm thinking about turning on the air conditioner - and it's February!!

Thanks for writing!

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017

Thank you so much. We don't get snow here either in this part of Spain where I live, and I'm glad. I'm not a winter person at all, although I'm Danish. I love and thrive in warm weather. Thanks again. I'm glad you liked my wee poem. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

very good on the haiku on snowflakes flutter. myself I've seen enough snow for one season, time to move onto the next. thanks for the share and have a great day

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thank you so much William. I'm so glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

Is there any avenue that a good poet can ride down and change, add are give total beauty and voice to, LOL your a very good driver, thank you.I loved the opening picture and after reading I love the poem.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot Ronnie, I'm so pleased you liked it. So sorry for my late answer. I'm struggling to catch up. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from brenda bickers

Excellent

Hi Ulla,
this is a beautifully descriptive haiku. I like the first two lines linking so well together, and you have managed to portray the season in each of the three lines with a stunning satori that most people can relate to.
Well done Brenda:))x

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot Brenda. I'm sorry I'm so very late. Struggling to catch up. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written haiku. The best part of winter is to see how the snowflakes flutter down to earth and pack on the surface to bring us hours of joy, except for the cold.

 Comment Written 20-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Hi Sandra, thank you so very much. I'm sorry about my late answer. I'm struggling to catch up. Thanks again. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Outstanding haiku, Ulla. You picked the perfect artwork for your presentation too. You are really very good at these haikus. Perhaps do more of them. I liked this line the best::

"softly down on frosted ground"

Bravo! Good job. Bob

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot, Bob. I'm so desperately late, working hard to catch up. Thanks again. All the best. Ulla:))

Comment from Ella25

Exceptional

Winter is bringing magical colour of cool white to paint the nature for us. It sits on slender trees and bushes with flowers so dry. Your haiku is brilliant and beautifully put together. Excellent work, Ulla. With love, Ella

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Ella, I've suddenly realised I haven't answered this wonderful review and you giving me those lovely stars. I simply don't know how that can have happened. It's a first. You must think I'm a very callous person. I'm so sorry and at the same time so pleased with the praise. I do hope you can forgive me. A hug. Ulla:xx

reply by Ella25 on 28-Feb-2017

No worries, Ulla. Our lives are busy with many things. I am happy for you, and you are more than welcome. With love, Ella

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Sorry, I meant to give you a 5. Excellent work with this haiku. The first two sentences connect perfectly and the satori is spot on. I love these challenges. I enjoy reading them. keep up the great work.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2017

Thanks a lot, Sasha. So sorry for my late answer. Struggling to catch up. All the best. Ulla:)))