A Walk Among Magnolias
Remembrance blends the strongest feelings36 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
very good on this well written, rhymed and metered poem the feelings and memories shared in this. Good luck and have a wonderful day
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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very good on this well written, rhymed and metered poem the feelings and memories shared in this. Good luck and have a wonderful day
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Thank you, William, for sharing "Walk." Rod
Comment from ronnie k
This visit is and can, by me, compared to a voyage among the ghost of my past that live securely within my heart and move like magic in my mind.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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This visit is and can, by me, compared to a voyage among the ghost of my past that live securely within my heart and move like magic in my mind.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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I am delighted "Walk" can evoke magical memories for you, ronnie. Thanks so much for sharing. Rod
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Wow, a stunning write and so beautifully emotive. This is a fantastic and mood lifting write, and an excellent and worthy competition entry, congratulations on an excellent write, kindest regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Wow, a stunning write and so beautifully emotive. This is a fantastic and mood lifting write, and an excellent and worthy competition entry, congratulations on an excellent write, kindest regards Meia :)
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much, Meia. I am thrilled "Walk" was a "stunning" read for you. I truly enjoyed writing it. Rod
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it was :) well done x
Comment from Mustang Patty
Good luck in the contest! Your poetry does a great job of conveying the feelings one has as they look upon the resting place of a dearly loved one. The descriptive words you've chosen to describe the sights, smells, and overall emotions are deep.
I enjoyed this well penned piece which conveys a great deal of feeling, indeed.
~patty~
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Good luck in the contest! Your poetry does a great job of conveying the feelings one has as they look upon the resting place of a dearly loved one. The descriptive words you've chosen to describe the sights, smells, and overall emotions are deep.
I enjoyed this well penned piece which conveys a great deal of feeling, indeed.
~patty~
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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I am very pleased that the sensory details of "Walk" appealed so much to you, patty. It was fun to imagine this experience as I wrote. Rod
Comment from June Sargent
What a lovely tribute to your mom! Your words painted a gorgeous landscape that was full of life and hope. I'm sure you will remember her each time you see the magnolias, smell their scent and feel the petals beneath your feet. Thank you for sharing these sentiments.
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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What a lovely tribute to your mom! Your words painted a gorgeous landscape that was full of life and hope. I'm sure you will remember her each time you see the magnolias, smell their scent and feel the petals beneath your feet. Thank you for sharing these sentiments.
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much for your wonderful praise of "Walk," June, and stellar rating. This poem came so easily, and I am thrilled you love it. Rod
Comment from persevere
Clever rhyming contributes to this tender walk among the magnolias. Even without the illustration it is easy to visualise the scene.
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reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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Clever rhyming contributes to this tender walk among the magnolias. Even without the illustration it is easy to visualise the scene.
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Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2017
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I am delighted you enjoyed the visual imagery of "Walk," persevere. The 5-line stanza and ABABA rhyme pattern I borrowed from Robert Frost. Rod
