Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Your last write...it was if you knew you would be flying in heaven soon... I still think about you Jenny God bless you, Mickey and your family on earth love always Meia xx

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

And I thank you, dear Meia! I'm happy you enjoyed this and hope you're doing well

reply by Meia (MESAYERS) on 19-Feb-2017

I am, thankyou Luna xx

reply by Meia (MESAYERS) on 19-Feb-2017

Up and down as always but your poems cheer me, well done as always Luna/Jeni xx

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem. Dreamland is a wonderful place to escape to. The moon, Jupiter, the stars and Pegasus all work together to make our time there very precious.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

Thank you, Sandra, for the warm review. I'm glad you enjoyed.

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Sounds like fun, Jeni, when do we leave?
I'll bring the beer, bottled water, and imagination, and you bring what you think you're gonna need.
Then....we're off!
Nice poem, very imaginative imagery and smooth flowing a,b,a,b rhyme scheme.
Reads very well aloud.
~Dean

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

Thanks my friend. I'm ready anytime you are 😎😎

reply by Dean Kuch on 19-Feb-2017

I'm ready to go right now, LOL!
~Dean

Comment from 8Puppies

Excellent

What an amazing poem! It sounds magical! I love your imagination and how your words express fantastical images. And the artwork is great too -- what a great part of your poem. They go perfectly well together. Thank you so much for sharing this with us.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017

I'm happy you enjoyed and thank you for your warm words of review

Comment from strivinginsc

Excellent

A very fun filled poem. it is very visual, one can see oneself along for the ride on this fantasy journey. Well written and good format.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Jeni
I love your highly creative poem about visions of wonderful happenings in our solar system, It has beautiful imagery.

We'll fly around old Jupiter
then ride the wing-ed horse ~
That Pegasus makes such a stir
has been the driving force

Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Dawn Munro

Excellent

I'm happy to see you writing again and hope you are recovering well. This is sublime, Luna - beautiful imagery one always enjoys - the kind of dreams that make sleeping an adventure all its own.

 Comment Written 19-Feb-2017

Comment from Bobbi22

Excellent

Swinging on the stars in this fantasy filled poem, flying around the universe and seeing sights never seen before. A lot of imagination and creativity here. Nicely done. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2017

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem you have penned. It feels somewhat like a children's poem. You used very good wording and great imagery. Maybe the words would be to big for a child! love, Teri

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2017

Comment from Rlegel99

Excellent

This poem flows well. Poems about dreams give us plenty of leeway since every one is different. Well written. The rhyme is wonderful.

 Comment Written 18-Feb-2017