Family time
The ultimate gift.2 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This senryu, Family Time, has a 5-7-5 meter and brings us all into the perspective that all our days are on the same calendar. No one is storing up time to use later.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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This senryu, Family Time, has a 5-7-5 meter and brings us all into the perspective that all our days are on the same calendar. No one is storing up time to use later.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from RodG
This is the kind of axiom I can see posted in a family's home, perhaps the kitchen. I especially like the pairing of "shared tick."
A terrific satori and perfect selection of artwork. Rod
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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This is the kind of axiom I can see posted in a family's home, perhaps the kitchen. I especially like the pairing of "shared tick."
A terrific satori and perfect selection of artwork. Rod
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks for the great review.
