City Within the City
contest entry7 total reviews
Comment from Bucketlist
It's a big social problem, which grows each year it seems . Your Haiku brings it to light. No place wants to be deluged with the problems it brings.
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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It's a big social problem, which grows each year it seems . Your Haiku brings it to light. No place wants to be deluged with the problems it brings.
Comment Written 16-Mar-2017
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2017
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Thanks so much for reading.
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You are very welcome. I like to get to know more people on this site
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It's a fun site and has proven valuable for me as the prompts get the old brain working sometimes. Look forward to seeing more of your work.
Comment from angel123
Your city poem is well-written and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts and good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
angel123
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Your city poem is well-written and I enjoyed reading it. Your artwork choice goes well with your thoughts and good luck in the contest. Best wishes!
angel123
Comment Written 19-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thanks much for reading.
Comment from Bill Schott
This haiku, City Within the City, shines a light on the downside of living in the metropolis. The level one reaches must be draining on the soul.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This haiku, City Within the City, shines a light on the downside of living in the metropolis. The level one reaches must be draining on the soul.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much for reading and your thoughts.
Comment from misscookie
You capture the meaning of your poem very well
By the photo you choose, it is a perfect match.
So how I find this hard to do
even though I have done it once.
Good job, thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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You capture the meaning of your poem very well
By the photo you choose, it is a perfect match.
So how I find this hard to do
even though I have done it once.
Good job, thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much.
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You're very welcome have a nice day
'Cookie
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. In just a few words you have painted a very important picture. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. well done.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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A well-written contest entry. In just a few words you have painted a very important picture. I think you did well completing the challenge of the contest. well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from His Grayness
Well deserving six stars (I don't have now) but truly 'GRIPPING" right from the outset, with choice of imagery and packaging that blasts the power of the message straight to the reader immediately. That's real grip!.. I cannot offer anything to improve this work and thank the author a powerful read! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Well deserving six stars (I don't have now) but truly 'GRIPPING" right from the outset, with choice of imagery and packaging that blasts the power of the message straight to the reader immediately. That's real grip!.. I cannot offer anything to improve this work and thank the author a powerful read! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much for your review and six star compliment. Very valued.
Comment from Douglas Paul
This is really powerful, my friend. You did well to draw attention to the homeless and describe their situation. I really like your satori. This should be a strong contest entry
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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This is really powerful, my friend. You did well to draw attention to the homeless and describe their situation. I really like your satori. This should be a strong contest entry
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Oh my gosh. Thanks so much. Very valued coming from a great haiku writer. I have feared to write one since i got a sarcastic review in the past so 1st attempt for a long time.
