When fire challenges rain
How Fire Hates the Rain26 total reviews
Comment from poetsteve15
The only reason you did not get six stars is because you could used bigger font so it would been easier to read. I love art work it looks like you got it from Pinterest. if you did you should give them credit for it. GB
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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The only reason you did not get six stars is because you could used bigger font so it would been easier to read. I love art work it looks like you got it from Pinterest. if you did you should give them credit for it. GB
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks Steve, for your kind review and the tip on crediting the artwork. Much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Ode Poetry has assimilation of cause and relation maturation, clearly praises fire as how fire challenges rain, captured in a free flow of thoughts coincided with conceptual derivation making it clearer with word visual imagery I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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This Ode Poetry has assimilation of cause and relation maturation, clearly praises fire as how fire challenges rain, captured in a free flow of thoughts coincided with conceptual derivation making it clearer with word visual imagery I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Alcreator Litt Dear for your kind review and stars. Much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS:Vance
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Love your presentation that accompanies your well rhymed and expressive poem.
So Mother Nature wins again
As fire seeks to light within
A place where rain will not again be near
What a great description in these three lines...Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Love your presentation that accompanies your well rhymed and expressive poem.
So Mother Nature wins again
As fire seeks to light within
A place where rain will not again be near
What a great description in these three lines...Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Mary, for your kind review....Much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS....Vance
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, an engaging testament to Nature's will and rampant destruction - well constructed in fluid verse - plaintive in its rendering...
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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In my opinion, an engaging testament to Nature's will and rampant destruction - well constructed in fluid verse - plaintive in its rendering...
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you evesayshi, for your kind review. Much appreciated! HIS GRAYNESS....Vance
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You are very welcome, YOUR GRAYNESS, Vance...Eve
Comment from prophetess
These are powerful lines in your ode to fire n rain. I would love to hear music to the words, what genre would
You like to see it in...Just wondering?
Oh those sparkling ashes disappear
Before they have delivered all their fear
The fire engines come too late
To make the folks appreciate
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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These are powerful lines in your ode to fire n rain. I would love to hear music to the words, what genre would
You like to see it in...Just wondering?
Oh those sparkling ashes disappear
Before they have delivered all their fear
The fire engines come too late
To make the folks appreciate
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you prophess, for you kind review! Much appreciated....HIS GRAYNESS...Vance
Comment from sue133
Your poem is well written and has a novel rhyming pattern. I thought it was for the fire and rain contest but being an ode, you might want to put in a few more powerful words? Only my thoughts. The image you have painted is well constructed and your poem flows nicely. Susan
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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Your poem is well written and has a novel rhyming pattern. I thought it was for the fire and rain contest but being an ode, you might want to put in a few more powerful words? Only my thoughts. The image you have painted is well constructed and your poem flows nicely. Susan
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks sue, for your kind review....Hey that rhymes! sorry to miss the 133, it just got past me! HIS GRAYNESS; ..Vance
