Dare Not Go
A Mystery Place Poem8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written mystery place poem. It is a dreaded visit each time we have to go there. Sometimes it is absolutely necessary to go sit in the dentist's chair.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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A very well-written mystery place poem. It is a dreaded visit each time we have to go there. Sometimes it is absolutely necessary to go sit in the dentist's chair.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from Sixty70
Oh gosh, you got me with that twist at the end! The dentist's office! Here I was thinking it was some kind of death panel lottery. Although, come to think of it, I prefer to see the dentist under the influence of some anti-anxiety medication.
Well done!!
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Oh gosh, you got me with that twist at the end! The dentist's office! Here I was thinking it was some kind of death panel lottery. Although, come to think of it, I prefer to see the dentist under the influence of some anti-anxiety medication.
Well done!!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks much. Glad i could surprise u!
Comment from BeasPeas
Great job. I was curious right up to the end what fate awaited. Aha! A visit to the dentist! Good rhyming and word choices, written in rhyming couplets. Marilyn
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Great job. I was curious right up to the end what fate awaited. Aha! A visit to the dentist! Good rhyming and word choices, written in rhyming couplets. Marilyn
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much.
Comment from ronnie k
My friend you had me in awe, I was so needing too know, what could bring so much confusion and terror, I have to say you almost had me angry LOL, I did not know nor had any idea until the very last line LOL, EXCEPTIONAL POETRY.
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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My friend you had me in awe, I was so needing too know, what could bring so much confusion and terror, I have to say you almost had me angry LOL, I did not know nor had any idea until the very last line LOL, EXCEPTIONAL POETRY.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2017
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I thank you so much for this lovely review. So glad i could surprise u and sorry to make u mad.lol
Comment from His Grayness
Whammo! whooee! great drama and clever ending! Superbly done and leaving a big smile. I wish I had the six well deserved stars to honor this! HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Whammo! whooee! great drama and clever ending! Superbly done and leaving a big smile. I wish I had the six well deserved stars to honor this! HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much and I am well honored by your virtual 6!
Comment from Marykelly
The waiting is the biggest challenge to the characters in the poem and their sense of dread is very realistically depicted here. All kinds of dreadful places come to mind at the beginning of the poem so that the dentist's office is almost a relief.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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The waiting is the biggest challenge to the characters in the poem and their sense of dread is very realistically depicted here. All kinds of dreadful places come to mind at the beginning of the poem so that the dentist's office is almost a relief.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks much for reading and commenting.
Comment from Thal1959
Hello, I created this contest. Thanks for participating. Your poem is written quite well, even though it wasn't what I intended an entry to be. Don't let that dishearten you - I don't determine the winner. I say all this because you took a place that is not a mystery - it is universally known. But you have done a good job in describing it in a mysterious way. It reads like a "suspensive" sentence in which the reader is not sure what the line is saying until the very end. Good luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Hello, I created this contest. Thanks for participating. Your poem is written quite well, even though it wasn't what I intended an entry to be. Don't let that dishearten you - I don't determine the winner. I say all this because you took a place that is not a mystery - it is universally known. But you have done a good job in describing it in a mysterious way. It reads like a "suspensive" sentence in which the reader is not sure what the line is saying until the very end. Good luck on the contest.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks much for reading and I am sorry I didn't describe a place of real mystery as intended. I did consider that but I was not sure.
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As I said, don't worry about my personal opinion - you should do fine.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
I liked the theme and enjoyed the mystery place poem tells about the dental clinic, and interestingly free flow of thoughts, bizarre atmosphere, humorous concern, approach, sentiment and visual imagery expression.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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I liked the theme and enjoyed the mystery place poem tells about the dental clinic, and interestingly free flow of thoughts, bizarre atmosphere, humorous concern, approach, sentiment and visual imagery expression.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much for your thoughtful review.
