Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Robyn:

I love the satori line in this less traditional haiku, and the fact that you've made it your first line, which is much less common. Cat burglar does say it all! The presentation is perfect in all of its elements.

Great job!

Kim

 Comment Written 17-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017

Thanks, Kim!

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Hey, this guy would be more than welcome to snatch anything away from me that he wanted, with the exception of one of my children, of course.
For that, he'd have a fight on his hands!
I wouldn't be chasin' him either, I can tell ya that!
Like it would do me a whole lotta good anyhow. I mean, what would I do if I caught up with him, use harsh language?
Great haiku, Robyn. Some are gonna try and tell you that this is just a run-on sentence, but I have personally seen this technique used in haiku all over the internet.
Nice job!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, sweetie!

reply by Dean Kuch on 16-Feb-2017

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Interesting that you decided to take what might be the satori line and made it your first line. The jaguar is very daring because of his ability to run fast. He can grab another animal's food and make off with it, secure that the morsel will be his. Great work with this. judi

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thanks, Judi!

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

I enjoyed this haiku in which the satori line appears first, driving he action and the descriptions to follow. Double meaning of cat burgler is effective. You also use strong verbs "snatches" and "outruns" which are vivid and descriptive. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, Andre!

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

Wow! This is a great haiku you have penned. I love that picture of the Jaguar you have penned. You used very good wording and very good imagery! A joy to read and review! Blessings, teri

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, Teri!

Comment from Mark Schardine

Excellent

cat burglar --
jaguar snatches morsel
and outruns pursuers

This one makes Catwoman seem harmless. I guess the citizens of Gotham City make reason to fear this cat.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

HAHAHA! Thank you!

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Cats (wild or house) are fascinating creatures. This was a skillful haiku. Well done Robyn. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thanks, Sandy!

Comment from ronnie k

Excellent

I have heard many names for this theft, cat burglar, Rob.. You I did you say with this, cat, theft, burglar. This theft is, has to be fast, sly and ready to jump on any opening, if that's not the picture has the remaining answers, great!

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thanks, Ronnie!

Comment from Chrissy710

Excellent

Hi robyn. Well put together and good use of double meaning with the Satori beginning this Haiku. I like this variation. must give it ago Cheers Christineð???

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thanks, Christine!

reply by Chrissy710 on 16-Feb-2017

welcome Robyn

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

I like the analogy of a cat burglar being compared to a jaguar nice play on words on the mannerism s of a jaguar in day to day life. Well done Robyn

dip

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017

Thank you, Dip!