A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from tfawcus
There is magic in the ever-changing skyscape of clouds and you give us its essence here in your lovely poem. I have always been fascinated by clouds, their ever-changing shapes, and all their different forms, signalling different weather patterns.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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There is magic in the ever-changing skyscape of clouds and you give us its essence here in your lovely poem. I have always been fascinated by clouds, their ever-changing shapes, and all their different forms, signalling different weather patterns.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Awww yes. On a quilt in the grass looking for images in the clouds on a hot summer day. It is a great pass time for those of us with artistic urges. I did enjoy those days as well, still do. In the picture I see a bird flying just above the bottom set of clouds in the center of the picture. A very well written poem Janet. Kudos. Nancy
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Awww yes. On a quilt in the grass looking for images in the clouds on a hot summer day. It is a great pass time for those of us with artistic urges. I did enjoy those days as well, still do. In the picture I see a bird flying just above the bottom set of clouds in the center of the picture. A very well written poem Janet. Kudos. Nancy
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Nancy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and for sharing my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Joy Graham
Your poem evokes memories of lazy summer days when clouds float by taking on delightful shapes. Yes, I agree with your description that clouds are a, "moving masterpiece". This poem is an enjoyable read today.
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Your poem evokes memories of lazy summer days when clouds float by taking on delightful shapes. Yes, I agree with your description that clouds are a, "moving masterpiece". This poem is an enjoyable read today.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Joy for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
The clouds can be very intriguing. There is always something interesting to see when they start to puff up like cotton wool and we can dream to play within the skies.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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The clouds can be very intriguing. There is always something interesting to see when they start to puff up like cotton wool and we can dream to play within the skies.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Such a light and breezy poem - the words, and
both rhythm and rhyme flowing smoothly throughout.
and being a lover of the clouds, a real treat to read, Janet.
Thank you for sharing this,
Blessings,
Margaret
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Such a light and breezy poem - the words, and
both rhythm and rhyme flowing smoothly throughout.
and being a lover of the clouds, a real treat to read, Janet.
Thank you for sharing this,
Blessings,
Margaret
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Margaret for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Pantygynt
But have you looked at them from both sides now? Sorry couldn't resist that one. They are indeed and you catch their magic well here in these. perfectly metered iambic tetrameters
I could be wrong in this but I think you are doing the wondering at the the clouds doing their wand'ring.
"If I could keep these wond'ring clouds" ???
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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But have you looked at them from both sides now? Sorry couldn't resist that one. They are indeed and you catch their magic well here in these. perfectly metered iambic tetrameters
I could be wrong in this but I think you are doing the wondering at the the clouds doing their wand'ring.
"If I could keep these wond'ring clouds" ???
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and "both sides now" comment. haha
I appreciate your comments and wonderful suggestion. I missed that one completely but quickly changed the word. Thanks again.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RGstar
Back to the basics of simple words that create a mountain , so shall we view, as too, stand and take in the beautiful imagery this offers.
Not a complex write, nor should it be. just a breath of fresh air.
Lovely JM.
My last six to you, dear friend.
A write of beautiful simplicity...the way it should be.
Best wishes.
RG
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Back to the basics of simple words that create a mountain , so shall we view, as too, stand and take in the beautiful imagery this offers.
Not a complex write, nor should it be. just a breath of fresh air.
Lovely JM.
My last six to you, dear friend.
A write of beautiful simplicity...the way it should be.
Best wishes.
RG
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you RG for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and those sparkling stars. I'm honored to get your last six.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from William Ross
A very good rhymed and metered poem on the clouds in the sky, I still enjoy watching them and seeing all the different shapes i can see. Great job. thanks for the share and have a great day
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A very good rhymed and metered poem on the clouds in the sky, I still enjoy watching them and seeing all the different shapes i can see. Great job. thanks for the share and have a great day
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Bill for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Each cloud a moving masterpiece
like murals sketched upon the sky.
Their edges curl and drift in flight --
on breaths of God -- they dare to fly.
GOSH! this reads like a beautiful, moving prayer. I loved this. SO beautifully joyful and imaginative, an amazing piece and very much enjoyed by me, a stunning poem well done kind regards Meia x
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Each cloud a moving masterpiece
like murals sketched upon the sky.
Their edges curl and drift in flight --
on breaths of God -- they dare to fly.
GOSH! this reads like a beautiful, moving prayer. I loved this. SO beautifully joyful and imaginative, an amazing piece and very much enjoyed by me, a stunning poem well done kind regards Meia x
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Meia for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from robyn corum
Janet,
What a lovely idea! -- A poem about clouds! I think we all used to lie back and stare up at clouds as kids and look for animals in their surfaces. What fun. Now, we're farrrr too busy being grown-ups~! *smile*
One potential suggestion?
1.) If I could keep these (wand'ring) clouds
Thanks!
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Janet,
What a lovely idea! -- A poem about clouds! I think we all used to lie back and stare up at clouds as kids and look for animals in their surfaces. What fun. Now, we're farrrr too busy being grown-ups~! *smile*
One potential suggestion?
1.) If I could keep these (wand'ring) clouds
Thanks!
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and excellent suggestion. I missed that one altogether. I changed it immediately.
Blessings
Janet
