A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from cumulus365
Hi JMF4119, This is my first time reading your poem. I like cumulus clouds. They are cheerful clouds on a bright day. They are the prettiest clouds of all the clouds. However, you would think they are white all the time, yesterday while I was waiting at the traffic light and it was around 5:30 pm coming from work, I noticed these clouds were of orange-amber colored. Even more dramatic. There were clumps that sporadically spreaded across the bright baby blue sky. The scenery was totally awesome. I have never seen such beauty. When you do get to observe these clouds, you do get a feeling of serenity because their gentle movement against the blue sky. I like your simile of the clouds against the sky as a sunny sky mural. This is a lovely poem as lovely as the white clouds passing around the globe. Thanks for sharing the your thoughts. Regards, cumulus
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Hi JMF4119, This is my first time reading your poem. I like cumulus clouds. They are cheerful clouds on a bright day. They are the prettiest clouds of all the clouds. However, you would think they are white all the time, yesterday while I was waiting at the traffic light and it was around 5:30 pm coming from work, I noticed these clouds were of orange-amber colored. Even more dramatic. There were clumps that sporadically spreaded across the bright baby blue sky. The scenery was totally awesome. I have never seen such beauty. When you do get to observe these clouds, you do get a feeling of serenity because their gentle movement against the blue sky. I like your simile of the clouds against the sky as a sunny sky mural. This is a lovely poem as lovely as the white clouds passing around the globe. Thanks for sharing the your thoughts. Regards, cumulus
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you cumulus for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I very much appreciate your kind and detailed comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dean Kuch
The content and eloquent wording of your lovely poem was a moving masterpiece as well, Janet.
And, unfortunately like yourself, I am all out of sixes to award you for your stunning effort.
Such a pity as it richly deserves one.
~Dean
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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The content and eloquent wording of your lovely poem was a moving masterpiece as well, Janet.
And, unfortunately like yourself, I am all out of sixes to award you for your stunning effort.
Such a pity as it richly deserves one.
~Dean
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Dean for your encouraging review. I always appreciate your comments and a virtual six from you is reward enough. .
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome, Janet, I wish I could have given more.
~Dean
Comment from Ogden
Good work, JMF. I especially like the poetic expression and imagery of the first stanza, that, in my opinion, would rate six stars as a two-couplet poem.
Don
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Good work, JMF. I especially like the poetic expression and imagery of the first stanza, that, in my opinion, would rate six stars as a two-couplet poem.
Don
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Don for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
A nice fascination, a passion and a wish the poet explores and exalts clouds and captures in visual portrayal; fantastic feeling around, poetised so artistically within a free flow of thoughts coupled with nice word visual imagery all the way I enjoyed the read.
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A nice fascination, a passion and a wish the poet explores and exalts clouds and captures in visual portrayal; fantastic feeling around, poetised so artistically within a free flow of thoughts coupled with nice word visual imagery all the way I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from mbroyles2
Terrific descriptions and imagery of beautiful clouds.
"On breaths of God --- they dare to fly."
Wonderful.
Great writing!
Michael
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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Terrific descriptions and imagery of beautiful clouds.
"On breaths of God --- they dare to fly."
Wonderful.
Great writing!
Michael
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Michael for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from patcelaw
Cloud formations are so much fun to watch as the float in the azure skies. I too love to see clouds and figure our some animals or objects in the shape. Blessings, Patricia
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Cloud formations are so much fun to watch as the float in the azure skies. I too love to see clouds and figure our some animals or objects in the shape. Blessings, Patricia
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Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Patricia for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
