A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from Jackarrie
Hi
I like this poem about how clouds form and change constantly. I too love to watch the cloud formations and colors. I also love to paint them. Fascinating to observe,
Well done, Mary
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Hi
I like this poem about how clouds form and change constantly. I too love to watch the cloud formations and colors. I also love to paint them. Fascinating to observe,
Well done, Mary
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Mary for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from poetsteve15
How soothing where your words. Great art work to go along with it. Keep up your writing you are to good to ever stop. GB
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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How soothing where your words. Great art work to go along with it. Keep up your writing you are to good to ever stop. GB
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you GB for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments and those sparkling six stars.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Doc Holiday
I love the cobalt blue sky and the majestic puffy clouds that fill the canvas.
Very descriptive and alluring poem that is almost child-like in it's sweet innocence. Well-done!
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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I love the cobalt blue sky and the majestic puffy clouds that fill the canvas.
Very descriptive and alluring poem that is almost child-like in it's sweet innocence. Well-done!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Doc for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from DR DIP
If I could keep these wand'ring clouds
that stretch across infinity,
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
That's close to my divinity
Hi JM just thought for perfect rhyme the above change in the context of your write would work.. just thought it rolls off the tongue better and has that religious connotation as well
just a thought it's still a lovely write as it is
dip
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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If I could keep these wand'ring clouds
that stretch across infinity,
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
That's close to my divinity
Hi JM just thought for perfect rhyme the above change in the context of your write would work.. just thought it rolls off the tongue better and has that religious connotation as well
just a thought it's still a lovely write as it is
dip
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you dip for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from azwildrosa
How beautiful. I love clouds. I'm always playing the shape game. The other day we had clouds that looked like flying saucers. It was the coolest. This is a wonderful piece. Takes me back to my childhood just the same. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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How beautiful. I love clouds. I'm always playing the shape game. The other day we had clouds that looked like flying saucers. It was the coolest. This is a wonderful piece. Takes me back to my childhood just the same. Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments and I'm pleased that you share my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A whimsical poem about clouds. Clouds have intrigued and entertained people throughout cultures and throughout the ages. My sister and I used to lay on the ground and make up stories about them. I love the way you described them with such grace.
Take care,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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A whimsical poem about clouds. Clouds have intrigued and entertained people throughout cultures and throughout the ages. My sister and I used to lay on the ground and make up stories about them. I love the way you described them with such grace.
Take care,
Rhonda
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you Rhonda for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and for sharing my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from strivinginsc
Great format and a good poem. I have always thought of the sky as a canvass. As a child we drew the cloud shapes during art sitting on the playground. Thanks for the memory.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Great format and a good poem. I have always thought of the sky as a canvass. As a child we drew the cloud shapes during art sitting on the playground. Thanks for the memory.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments and shared memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Wabigoon
JM--
Ah, my uncle used to say "if only god had the same sense of color artists do then sunsets wouldn't be so blatant" or some such thing. that's not quite right but what I feel here. I wish, frankly, you would connect your personal power to the clouds you see, rather that giving it all to god. Is it possible you project your thoughts into those clouds and have the power to do so?
Thanks. enjoyed the poem.
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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JM--
Ah, my uncle used to say "if only god had the same sense of color artists do then sunsets wouldn't be so blatant" or some such thing. that's not quite right but what I feel here. I wish, frankly, you would connect your personal power to the clouds you see, rather that giving it all to god. Is it possible you project your thoughts into those clouds and have the power to do so?
Thanks. enjoyed the poem.
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments but I am pleased to give the power and glory to God. Any power I have come from Him. I'm glad you enjoyed the poem Jeff.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sis Cat
A great poem that captures a child's joy and wonder at cloud watching. These are truly one of God's "moving masterpiece like murals." Your cloud riding conclusion reminds me of magic carpet rides. Thank you for sharing your inspiring memories.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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A great poem that captures a child's joy and wonder at cloud watching. These are truly one of God's "moving masterpiece like murals." Your cloud riding conclusion reminds me of magic carpet rides. Thank you for sharing your inspiring memories.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Thal1959
Very well done. Reads smoothly with pleasant rhymes and charming, if not profound expressions. It is always a pleasure to read poems of things universal to all of us.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Very well done. Reads smoothly with pleasant rhymes and charming, if not profound expressions. It is always a pleasure to read poems of things universal to all of us.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your kind comments.
Blessings
Janet
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You're welcome.
