A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
Hello Janet,
Excellent imagery in this delightful reverie
a moving masterpiece in more ways than one
Beautifully rhymed and metered poem
where words float like clouds across the page
Excellent picture and presentation to enhance the imagery
Very well done
RS
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Hello Janet,
Excellent imagery in this delightful reverie
a moving masterpiece in more ways than one
Beautifully rhymed and metered poem
where words float like clouds across the page
Excellent picture and presentation to enhance the imagery
Very well done
RS
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you RS for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I greatly appreciate you kind words.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from RodG
This poem is perfect for today where I live as the skies are filled with soft clouds and the temperature is near 60. I love how you personify the clouds as "drifting on breaths of God." And nice use of ABCB rhyming to enhance the joyful mood. Rod
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This poem is perfect for today where I live as the skies are filled with soft clouds and the temperature is near 60. I love how you personify the clouds as "drifting on breaths of God." And nice use of ABCB rhyming to enhance the joyful mood. Rod
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Rod for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Douglas Paul
I really like this muse on watching the clouds. They are fascinating. I also like the way you progress to the moon and stars and attribute it all to God's hand. Good rhyme and meter in this make for a smooth read
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I really like this muse on watching the clouds. They are fascinating. I also like the way you progress to the moon and stars and attribute it all to God's hand. Good rhyme and meter in this make for a smooth read
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Douglas for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from l.raven
HI Janet, I love the clouds....when I take my grandkids to Florida once a year...that's the game we play...finding different pictures in the sky....I tell them that when our pets pass away they are up there jumping and playing from cloud to cloud...I have always wondered what it would be like to sit on one and look down to earth...sigh....I love your poem...very nicely written....and I love your picture...looks like a alligator opening his mouth on the right....and a hippo with wings on the bottom...LOL...love ya Linda xxoo ******
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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HI Janet, I love the clouds....when I take my grandkids to Florida once a year...that's the game we play...finding different pictures in the sky....I tell them that when our pets pass away they are up there jumping and playing from cloud to cloud...I have always wondered what it would be like to sit on one and look down to earth...sigh....I love your poem...very nicely written....and I love your picture...looks like a alligator opening his mouth on the right....and a hippo with wings on the bottom...LOL...love ya Linda xxoo ******
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Linda for your thoughtful and encouraging review. I've played that game with the grandkids too. A lovely memory.
Yikes - a alligator opening his mouth on the right....and a hippo with wings on the bottom. I'll have to go back and check that out. haha
Blessings
Janet
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I love doing that with them...sigh...your so welcome...I hope you find your alligator...and your flying hippo...LOL...Blessings to you to sweet girl...love xxoo
Comment from nancyrabbrose
I value your beautiful poem. I especially like your "on breaths of God -- they dare to fly". Clouds are indeed awesome and a wonderful way to feel God. Your poem has enhanced that experience. Well done.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I value your beautiful poem. I especially like your "on breaths of God -- they dare to fly". Clouds are indeed awesome and a wonderful way to feel God. Your poem has enhanced that experience. Well done.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Nancy for the thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from MissMerri
This is so beautiful, and I could relate strongly to the well-expressed sentiments because I too, have always been fascinated by the artwork in the skies. Whether clouds or stars or sunrises or snow falling, the skies are ever-changing art. So.. I loved the idea of your poem as well as the splendid way you executed it. I especially loved the idea of jumping aboard and sailing a cloud across the sky. What a ride!
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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This is so beautiful, and I could relate strongly to the well-expressed sentiments because I too, have always been fascinated by the artwork in the skies. Whether clouds or stars or sunrises or snow falling, the skies are ever-changing art. So.. I loved the idea of your poem as well as the splendid way you executed it. I especially loved the idea of jumping aboard and sailing a cloud across the sky. What a ride!
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you MissMerri for the thoughtful and encouraging review and for those magic six stars.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from valmay
A beautiful poem with some wonderful imagery. I loved murals sketched upon the sky. A nice romantic ending, to finish a most enjoyable read.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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A beautiful poem with some wonderful imagery. I loved murals sketched upon the sky. A nice romantic ending, to finish a most enjoyable read.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you valmay for the thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mustang Patty
You've painted a pretty picture of a cloud-filled sky with your well placed words. I enjoyed the poem very much. The words flow well, and none of the rhymes felt forced.
Thank you for sharing this well-penned piece,
~patty~
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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You've painted a pretty picture of a cloud-filled sky with your well placed words. I enjoyed the poem very much. The words flow well, and none of the rhymes felt forced.
Thank you for sharing this well-penned piece,
~patty~
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you patty for the thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
This is a really lovely poem and I agree with you that the clouds are masterpieces in the sky. Ever changing, if you look long enough you can make pictures I find. I did it a a child and still do. Your poem moves along in a serene manner that suits the subject. Good rhyme and rhythm maintained throughout. Very nice final stanza and the whole is a good read. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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This is a really lovely poem and I agree with you that the clouds are masterpieces in the sky. Ever changing, if you look long enough you can make pictures I find. I did it a a child and still do. Your poem moves along in a serene manner that suits the subject. Good rhyme and rhythm maintained throughout. Very nice final stanza and the whole is a good read. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Dorothy for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments and I'm pleased that you share my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi JMF,
I enjoyed your fanciful view of the clouds and all of the wonder they instill. I especially liked your final thoughts:
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
to sail with you beyond the sea.
Nice work!
Kim
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Hi JMF,
I enjoyed your fanciful view of the clouds and all of the wonder they instill. I especially liked your final thoughts:
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
to sail with you beyond the sea.
Nice work!
Kim
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
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Thank you Kim for the thoughtful and encouraging review. I appreciate your comments and I'm pleased you shared your favorite lines.
Blessings
Janet
