A Moving Masterpiece
Clouds86 total reviews
Comment from Kasey Carroll
The imagery of your poem allows me to see the clouds in your description.The first line of the second stanza I like the best. Great poem.
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The imagery of your poem allows me to see the clouds in your description.The first line of the second stanza I like the best. Great poem.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you K C for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Really enjoyed this beautiful poem, wonderful flow throughout with some lovely lines.
Particularly enjoyed the last stanza which finished your 'masterpiece' so well.
Thanks for sharing
Have a lovely evening
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Really enjoyed this beautiful poem, wonderful flow throughout with some lovely lines.
Particularly enjoyed the last stanza which finished your 'masterpiece' so well.
Thanks for sharing
Have a lovely evening
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. Thank you for sharing your favorite stanza.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Gma48
Charming poem! The imagery drawn is very effective. The rhyming works well. Simply- short and sweet! It makes me want to float on a cloud too!
Gma48
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Charming poem! The imagery drawn is very effective. The rhyming works well. Simply- short and sweet! It makes me want to float on a cloud too!
Gma48
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review. :)
Blessings
Janet
Comment from jmdg1954
I always envisioned myself falling through them as if it were whipped cream. Of course it would need the maraschino cherry to boot.
I enjoyed your poem, finding it calm and soothing.
Nicely done. John
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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I always envisioned myself falling through them as if it were whipped cream. Of course it would need the maraschino cherry to boot.
I enjoyed your poem, finding it calm and soothing.
Nicely done. John
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you John for your thoughtful and entertaining review. Loved it.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, this is a most exquisite piece of write. Every word, every expression just perfect and full of colours and imagery. I could see the clouds in various shapes flowing by. Just great writing.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, this is a most exquisite piece of write. Every word, every expression just perfect and full of colours and imagery. I could see the clouds in various shapes flowing by. Just great writing.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Danny for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I do too! I love to find something in clouds, then point them out to whoever is with me to see if they see it too. This is a lovely poem, Janet, now I'll be looking at clouds and making them into poems!! Well done, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
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I do too! I love to find something in clouds, then point them out to whoever is with me to see if they see it too. This is a lovely poem, Janet, now I'll be looking at clouds and making them into poems!! Well done, it was a pleasure to read. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for sharing my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from ruzu27
Your poem reads like an ode to the clouds, it is so light and flows well.
I enjoyed very much reading it and the art work you chose complements it very well.
"Each cloud a moving masterpiece" that's how I feel about clouds.
When I was a kid I used to watch the shape of those huge white clouds picturing that I was living in village, high mountains around me and that's what it looked like.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Your poem reads like an ode to the clouds, it is so light and flows well.
I enjoyed very much reading it and the art work you chose complements it very well.
"Each cloud a moving masterpiece" that's how I feel about clouds.
When I was a kid I used to watch the shape of those huge white clouds picturing that I was living in village, high mountains around me and that's what it looked like.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and for sharing my childhood memory.
Blessings
Janet
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you are welcome
Comment from marybell1
A beautiful imagination. I often look up at the clouds looking for different shapes. It is amazing what you can sometimes see, though I have never considered riding on one. Also your flow and rhyming was spot on.
Congratulations.
Marybell1.
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A beautiful imagination. I often look up at the clouds looking for different shapes. It is amazing what you can sometimes see, though I have never considered riding on one. Also your flow and rhyming was spot on.
Congratulations.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you Marybell Sandra for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Rlegel99
Clouds are interesting subject matter. It would u 's be fun to float on one. This poem flows well. The artwork works well with the piece.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Clouds are interesting subject matter. It would u 's be fun to float on one. This poem flows well. The artwork works well with the piece.
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review
Blessings
Janet
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello jmf4119, I love your poem, and I love big puffy clouds. They still amaze me. I especially liked:
Each cloud a moving masterpiece
like murals sketched upon the sky.
(I don't think that I shall ever look at a cloud without remembering the two lines above - beautifully stated - great analogy.)
I also liked:
If I could keep these wand'ring clouds
that stretch across infinity,
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
to sail with you beyond the sea.
(Just lovely. Good imagery and a dreamy feeling of calm and peace.)
Wonderful complementary artwork choice. Save a spot for me on one of the clouds.
And now just sharing my afterthought:
I saw a puffy cloud go by,
A masterpiece undone,
and so I hitched a ride on one,
The masterpiece now done.
Great complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Hello jmf4119, I love your poem, and I love big puffy clouds. They still amaze me. I especially liked:
Each cloud a moving masterpiece
like murals sketched upon the sky.
(I don't think that I shall ever look at a cloud without remembering the two lines above - beautifully stated - great analogy.)
I also liked:
If I could keep these wand'ring clouds
that stretch across infinity,
I'd choose one from the cobalt blue,
to sail with you beyond the sea.
(Just lovely. Good imagery and a dreamy feeling of calm and peace.)
Wonderful complementary artwork choice. Save a spot for me on one of the clouds.
And now just sharing my afterthought:
I saw a puffy cloud go by,
A masterpiece undone,
and so I hitched a ride on one,
The masterpiece now done.
Great complementary artwork choice. A pleasure to read. Keep the blue waters flowing. LateBloomer
Comment Written 18-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2017
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Thank you LateBloomer for your thoughtful, encouraging and exquisite review. I loved it.
Blessings
Janet
