The Mating of the Mantis Couple
'Mommy, tell me about my daddy.' 'He was good!' said Mommy.5 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
LOL! I like this haiku. The pun or play on words at the end marks a satori moment, I'm guessing. It follows the format of 17 syllables or less, in that it is 17 syllables.
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LOL! I like this haiku. The pun or play on words at the end marks a satori moment, I'm guessing. It follows the format of 17 syllables or less, in that it is 17 syllables.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
Comment from frogbook
Now, that's a challenge to write a haiku about insects but you have accomplished the job in good form. The satori certainly said it all. Great job. JoAnn
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Now, that's a challenge to write a haiku about insects but you have accomplished the job in good form. The satori certainly said it all. Great job. JoAnn
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
Comment from winnona
A well-written contest entry. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest. The poem is well-written and captures the topic well. Good luck in the contest.
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A well-written contest entry. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest. The poem is well-written and captures the topic well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2017
Comment from strivinginsc
This is excellent, you were able to do all requested with a hint of humor, yet reality. The photo is excellent and fits the poem well.
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This is excellent, you were able to do all requested with a hint of humor, yet reality. The photo is excellent and fits the poem well.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hmmm ... very clever ... very!
Don't know what else to say. These little pieces end up having a review longer than the post itself, or the site refuses to accept it.
So here we are ... :) :)
Good one!
Best wishes for the contest, anonymous poet!
Sonali :)
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Hmmm ... very clever ... very!
Don't know what else to say. These little pieces end up having a review longer than the post itself, or the site refuses to accept it.
So here we are ... :) :)
Good one!
Best wishes for the contest, anonymous poet!
Sonali :)
Comment Written 15-Feb-2017
