Haiku/Haiga
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Comment from emptypage
Wow. This is profound.
Humans are certainly adept at predation. Of course we (as a group, not you or me personally) admire these cats.
And, as you explain, we will end as they end. At this rate, it may be tomorrow.
Great work.
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Wow. This is profound.
Humans are certainly adept at predation. Of course we (as a group, not you or me personally) admire these cats.
And, as you explain, we will end as they end. At this rate, it may be tomorrow.
Great work.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from Mands
Beautifully written and thought provoking. Is extinction something we are aiming for? Guess time will tell. Loved it. :-)
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Beautifully written and thought provoking. Is extinction something we are aiming for? Guess time will tell. Loved it. :-)
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from Jacob Collins
I enjoyed this hakiu, and I liked the imagery behind it, I particularly liked that last line, 'extinct', is this the way we'll go? A well written piece...Jacob
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I enjoyed this hakiu, and I liked the imagery behind it, I particularly liked that last line, 'extinct', is this the way we'll go? A well written piece...Jacob
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from Selina Stambi
Extinct ... ha! Sums the whole tale of the ideal role model up, doesn't it?
Nice teeth too ... :)
Best wishes for the contest, Mikey. Glad to review you today.
Happy Valentine's!
Smiles,
Sonali
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Extinct ... ha! Sums the whole tale of the ideal role model up, doesn't it?
Nice teeth too ... :)
Best wishes for the contest, Mikey. Glad to review you today.
Happy Valentine's!
Smiles,
Sonali
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
Comment from royowen
Ah, the age old predicament of comparing the old with the new, the extinct with the present, creation with evolution, (although some tiger populations are regionally, already extinct, or near extinction, for different reasons) but a brilliantly penned enigmatic haiku, a real paradox, well done, it should spark a lot of interest, blessings, Roy
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Ah, the age old predicament of comparing the old with the new, the extinct with the present, creation with evolution, (although some tiger populations are regionally, already extinct, or near extinction, for different reasons) but a brilliantly penned enigmatic haiku, a real paradox, well done, it should spark a lot of interest, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
