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Dear Dora

I remember with love.

4 total reviews 
Comment from robyn corum
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George,

A very tender and heart-warming study on love and peace and acceptance. Very nice!

Some notes:
1.) "Yeah mom,(") he hollered(,) running for the bus.

2.) "Won(')t You Be My Valentine" cards,

3.) administering evasive tactics (to) derail the progression

Thanks!

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 04-Mar-2017
    Thanks for your comments. I'm not sure what "administering evasive tactics (to) derail the progression) , means. The attempt was to set the scene.
reply by robyn corum on 04-Mar-2017
    You know you wrote that, right?
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This was a touching write. Your writing is solid and I could feel the emotions in your writing. A wonderful tribute to Roy. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
    Thank you Michael for the nice comments. I appreciate your
    remarks.

    gsnewton76
Comment from Bill Schott
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A powerful message of faith that will travel from one generation to the next as was intended. A life is a prime example of God at work and impressing others with the power of an eternal creator and redeemer.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
    Please reread. I have trouble with the program. It gets submitted before I'm finished.
Comment from Dustybones
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Seem like a good start then it ends in the middle of nowhere. Hope to see an edit of this later. Have a good V day. Wishing you the best. dustybones

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2017

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
    Hi - Dustybones
    I hope you re-read the story. It always gets submitted before I'm done. I don't know how to
    run the program apparently. If I have to leave, when I get back to finish or edit its been
    been submitted. Wow is me!

    gnewton75
reply by Dustybones on 13-Feb-2017
    When you are on the page writing the story look at the very bottom by scrolling down. You'll see the word PREVIEW...Always make sure that is clicked to YES. Then the your post will not be shown to the public. With preview YES you can work on it without the post being released. Then once when you are certain you have your post ready then change it to preview NO. If you have any questions about this pleaae ask. TY