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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku (wicked wasp)"A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
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Comment from Douglas Paul
MMMMM - somehow I forgot to review this one. I do like it. I think the satori is really strong. I would give this one my vote to get into the anthology
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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MMMMM - somehow I forgot to review this one. I do like it. I think the satori is really strong. I would give this one my vote to get into the anthology
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reading and reviewing, Doug.
Sorry for the delayed reply.
I do appreciate your kind comments as always.
Comment from Ulla
Yikes, that is rather disgusting, Dean. Nature is a wondrous place and how clever of her to remove the legs so it can't escape. You couldn't make up that kind of horror. Well, I suppose, you could.Lol. A wonderful haiku. I love it. Great addition to the book. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Yikes, that is rather disgusting, Dean. Nature is a wondrous place and how clever of her to remove the legs so it can't escape. You couldn't make up that kind of horror. Well, I suppose, you could.Lol. A wonderful haiku. I love it. Great addition to the book. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Hahaha...Yeah, I could, Ulla.
Trust me on that, heh-heh.
Thanks for reading my haiku.
~Dean
Comment from Dustybones
Yes..THAT'S one bad ass Momma! It's a great post with an even better note. Amazing to read how these tiny bugs seem to think. I wonder how they actually think? Thanks for posting this.
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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Yes..THAT'S one bad ass Momma! It's a great post with an even better note. Amazing to read how these tiny bugs seem to think. I wonder how they actually think? Thanks for posting this.
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2017
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I don't "think" I wanna find out, Dusty, LOL.
Thanks for your review.
~Dean :)
Comment from Janet Foor
Yikes! One bad ass Momma indeed. I always learn something new from your musings. A bone house wasp is one creepy wasp. I don't like spiders but.....
Very well done Dean.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Yikes! One bad ass Momma indeed. I always learn something new from your musings. A bone house wasp is one creepy wasp. I don't like spiders but.....
Very well done Dean.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thanks, Janet.
Have a good evening.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Wow, I have ALWAYS hated Wasps, having been stung several times, evil creatures but these sound much worse! Ugh that's a horror story in itself, well done as always a great write Dean x kind regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Wow, I have ALWAYS hated Wasps, having been stung several times, evil creatures but these sound much worse! Ugh that's a horror story in itself, well done as always a great write Dean x kind regards Meia :)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thanks...
Comment from Just2Write
Yikes. Even a spider shouldn't have to go out that way. Oh, right - he's not 'going' anywhere. A delightfully horrid description of the bone-house wasp -
Wasps are very creepy critters. They kill, they eat fresh and fetid meat, and love to tear the wings right off of bees. Not nice, but a very necessary part of nature's clean up crew.
Nice use of short-long short in your haiku, and a brilliant, but cringe worthy closing line.
Rose.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Yikes. Even a spider shouldn't have to go out that way. Oh, right - he's not 'going' anywhere. A delightfully horrid description of the bone-house wasp -
Wasps are very creepy critters. They kill, they eat fresh and fetid meat, and love to tear the wings right off of bees. Not nice, but a very necessary part of nature's clean up crew.
Nice use of short-long short in your haiku, and a brilliant, but cringe worthy closing line.
Rose.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thank you for checking out my haiku, Rose.
I very much appreciate your comments.
Warmest wishes,
~Dean
Comment from Leineco
C R E E P Y!
But GREAT "digest-ization" of the topic at hand in haiku format! (as if
wasps aren't nightmarish enough!!!!)
We love nature when she is all decked out in her finery. . .but (shudder)
turn a blind eye to her gruesome villainy, don't we?
Well done Dean - definitely memorable! :-)
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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C R E E P Y!
But GREAT "digest-ization" of the topic at hand in haiku format! (as if
wasps aren't nightmarish enough!!!!)
We love nature when she is all decked out in her finery. . .but (shudder)
turn a blind eye to her gruesome villainy, don't we?
Well done Dean - definitely memorable! :-)
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Yes, sometimes we have to I think, Lorraine.
You know, just to keep our sanity?
Thanks for the review.
Comment from Louise Michelle
Yikes! Leave it to you to find out about this disgusting species. This is so fu--ing gross, Dean. I have absolutely lost my appetite for lunch. Gee thanks, kid, LOL. Oh, I almost forgot - good job on the write, haha.
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Yikes! Leave it to you to find out about this disgusting species. This is so fu--ing gross, Dean. I have absolutely lost my appetite for lunch. Gee thanks, kid, LOL. Oh, I almost forgot - good job on the write, haha.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Hey, don't mention it, Louise.
I've helped many readers to diet involuntarily, LOL.
Take care,
~Dean
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LOL! So now I'm supposed to thank you, I guess, haha.
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Your glowing commentary is thanks enough.
~Dean
Comment from Lu Saluna
I love this haiku, Dean.
It is quite creative and I get some really vivid imagery while reading it.
You also have beautiful alliteration in each line.
This is a wonderful haiku, just beautiful.
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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I love this haiku, Dean.
It is quite creative and I get some really vivid imagery while reading it.
You also have beautiful alliteration in each line.
This is a wonderful haiku, just beautiful.
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2017
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Thanks, Lura.
I didn't so much as even place in the contest.
Gotta' love the CEC, right?
I appreciate the six and the thoughtful review.
I apologize for my delayed reply.
I'm very grateful for your time and efforts reviewing this.
Have a great week,
~Dean
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I am sorry to hear that. I don't have any faith in them either but I have entered a bunch of them. I just want to challenge myself to write other things especially since I am devoting so much time to haiku and now tanka.
Great photo, I love the special effects!
Comment from TAB_that's me
Great alliteration in each line.
Thanks for the author notes on feng shui which makes for a good satori.
Nice imagery and interconnected lines.
teresa
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Great alliteration in each line.
Thanks for the author notes on feng shui which makes for a good satori.
Nice imagery and interconnected lines.
teresa
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
