Dance of life
We end up where we began.18 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
Personally, I would have loved to see you mention some sort of dance that has us going backwards, too. *smile* Seems like I do that much too often in my own life! Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Personally, I would have loved to see you mention some sort of dance that has us going backwards, too. *smile* Seems like I do that much too often in my own life! Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Yes if the contest had had an extended syllable count, could have had more fun
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Septolet. Our life is like a dance. We can choose what kind of dance we will dance with whom we will dance at a certain time.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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A very well-written Septolet. Our life is like a dance. We can choose what kind of dance we will dance with whom we will dance at a certain time.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, this really says it all - your poem defines life's dance, while mine, its music - beautifully expressed and artfully stated - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
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In my opinion, this really says it all - your poem defines life's dance, while mine, its music - beautifully expressed and artfully stated - in perfect compliance with the prompt. Best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much for the great review. It placed first.
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Congrats - well deserved...
Comment from ronnie k
A wonderful defining of what, ho and where this love we have can and will take us, music is what I compare poetry too, what better action than dance does music product.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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A wonderful defining of what, ho and where this love we have can and will take us, music is what I compare poetry too, what better action than dance does music product.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from rspoet
This is a fine entry for the contest
with fourteen words in the two parts
that relate to each other
Seems like we start and end with a waltz
that makes life enjoyable,
Excellent art work to match
Good luck in the contest
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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This is a fine entry for the contest
with fourteen words in the two parts
that relate to each other
Seems like we start and end with a waltz
that makes life enjoyable,
Excellent art work to match
Good luck in the contest
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Benny Beeharry
Hi friend, you may be right. Sometimes life repeats itself. But there are still a lot more.it's time that gets all embroiled , but we could make it different if we wake up spiritually. We must try to change things around us and try to understand.not always easy.
Danny Jock
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Hi friend, you may be right. Sometimes life repeats itself. But there are still a lot more.it's time that gets all embroiled , but we could make it different if we wake up spiritually. We must try to change things around us and try to understand.not always easy.
Danny Jock
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a lovely snapshot of our lives with the beautiful metaphor.
A joy to read your delightful poem.
Blessings
Janet
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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This is a lovely snapshot of our lives with the beautiful metaphor.
A joy to read your delightful poem.
Blessings
Janet
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks for a great review.
Comment from William Ross
Nice, very good on the prompt with this septolet, life is a bit like a dance through life. Thanks for the share and best of luck on this. Have a good day
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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Nice, very good on the prompt with this septolet, life is a bit like a dance through life. Thanks for the share and best of luck on this. Have a good day
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Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
