Dance of life
We end up where we began.18 total reviews
Comment from Aiona
What a lovely poem. As the Septolet should, it paints a picture. No need to choose FanArt for it. I can see the dancers twirling, tangoing with only your words. 14 syllables, two parts - both dealing with the metaphor of life as a dance.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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What a lovely poem. As the Septolet should, it paints a picture. No need to choose FanArt for it. I can see the dancers twirling, tangoing with only your words. 14 syllables, two parts - both dealing with the metaphor of life as a dance.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the lovely review.
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written and very beautiful and is a very original and creative contest entry with beautiful artwork I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
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Yes this is well written and very beautiful and is a very original and creative contest entry with beautiful artwork I enjoyed good luck regards Jill
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from angel123
I like your definition of life and your artwork choice expressions the movement of life very moving and colorful. Good luck in the contest and best wishes.
angel123
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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I like your definition of life and your artwork choice expressions the movement of life very moving and colorful. Good luck in the contest and best wishes.
angel123
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from winnona
a well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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a well-written contest entry. Your words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you have completed the challenge of the contest well.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Lu Saluna
I really like this poem. It is creative and so true to what our lives.
In a few short words, you paralleled dancing birth to old age.
Well cone.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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I really like this poem. It is creative and so true to what our lives.
In a few short words, you paralleled dancing birth to old age.
Well cone.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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thank you for reviewing.
Comment from Bill Schott
This septolet, Dance of Life, takes the dance floor as the metaphor for our cycle of life and death and life renewed. We begin with the formal movements and swirl into bolder moves that find us dipping and lifting until we return to the center of the dance floor.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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This septolet, Dance of Life, takes the dance floor as the metaphor for our cycle of life and death and life renewed. We begin with the formal movements and swirl into bolder moves that find us dipping and lifting until we return to the center of the dance floor.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from judester
This is a great entry except you have to have two words on each line for seven lines. I like the idea of dances to suit our moods and situations in life. Happy? jitterbug romantic? tango. See you at the finish line, cheers, judester
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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This is a great entry except you have to have two words on each line for seven lines. I like the idea of dances to suit our moods and situations in life. Happy? jitterbug romantic? tango. See you at the finish line, cheers, judester
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review. I believe the stanzas can be divided unequally as long as they equal 14.
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You are right. Another lesson learned, cheers, j
Comment from RGstar
Wherever there is dance and life...you will find me.
Came across this. Nice colours and words written in conjunction with your image gives that special movement ...in dance, of which I thus treasure.
Good movement.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Wherever there is dance and life...you will find me.
Came across this. Nice colours and words written in conjunction with your image gives that special movement ...in dance, of which I thus treasure.
Good movement.
Good luck in the competition.
My best wishes.
RGstar
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks RG, I won. Glad you liked it.
Comment from Bobbi22
As we dance our way through life, sometimes we come across steps that are worth repeating. Very well written septolet. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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As we dance our way through life, sometimes we come across steps that are worth repeating. Very well written septolet. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from zanya
Yes a nice metaphorical glance at life and its crazy ways and where it takes us reflected upon here in this Septolet - and a beautiful pic to accompany
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Yes a nice metaphorical glance at life and its crazy ways and where it takes us reflected upon here in this Septolet - and a beautiful pic to accompany
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thank you for reviewing.
