My Haikus
Viewing comments for Chapter 27 "Newton the Newt"Collection of haikus
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Comment from Cranial Thinker
Oh how truly wonderful the individual eyes can be a formidably uniqueness unsurpassed by anything on our paralleled heaven when taking into account of the many variations in latitudes and longitudes of seen beauty and an awareness of cuteness....I found this writing to be a very fascinating eye opener my Brother Darren thanks for sharing it....Cranial Thinker
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Oh how truly wonderful the individual eyes can be a formidably uniqueness unsurpassed by anything on our paralleled heaven when taking into account of the many variations in latitudes and longitudes of seen beauty and an awareness of cuteness....I found this writing to be a very fascinating eye opener my Brother Darren thanks for sharing it....Cranial Thinker
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thank-you so much for reading, I go through dry spells of rcving reviews, and your trfecta has truly touched my heart at a time when I needed it.
Bless you, my cosmic brother!
Darren
Comment from Maureen's Pen
Dear Darren, non-conformist indeed. I shall just say this one is indeed as cute as your friend. Not traditional haiku, but still a nice solid read.
Thanks for sharing.
m
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Dear Darren, non-conformist indeed. I shall just say this one is indeed as cute as your friend. Not traditional haiku, but still a nice solid read.
Thanks for sharing.
m
Comment Written 12-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2017
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Thanks for your support, and kindred cute ~
Blessings,
BB
Comment from DR DIP
You certainly are badge. The grand poobars of Haikus are going to shoot you down in flames a purist haikuist will tear strips off this for not following the sacred rules of haiku.
Personally I think Haikus aren't really poetry. just 3 lines of an obvious description.
Its the lazy poets poem.
Tough words but it's just my opinion I am glad you are a nonconformist today Wait to Dean and gypsy rose read this they are going to be disgusted and send you to Haiku class lol
I like it by the way lol
dip
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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You certainly are badge. The grand poobars of Haikus are going to shoot you down in flames a purist haikuist will tear strips off this for not following the sacred rules of haiku.
Personally I think Haikus aren't really poetry. just 3 lines of an obvious description.
Its the lazy poets poem.
Tough words but it's just my opinion I am glad you are a nonconformist today Wait to Dean and gypsy rose read this they are going to be disgusted and send you to Haiku class lol
I like it by the way lol
dip
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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TYTY
Comment from winnona
A well-written haiku club challenge. The poem captures the feeling of the little guy. Salamanders are such neat creatures. They can be very interesting to watch. This one looks like the red newts that live in the creeks around here. If it is they do make a sound it is hard to describe.Kind of like a bark and a frog sound combined only softer.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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A well-written haiku club challenge. The poem captures the feeling of the little guy. Salamanders are such neat creatures. They can be very interesting to watch. This one looks like the red newts that live in the creeks around here. If it is they do make a sound it is hard to describe.Kind of like a bark and a frog sound combined only softer.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017
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Ty so much for your kind word and continued support.
BB
Comment from patcelaw
What better thing can we say about ourselves than to say we are a non conformist.
If we all conformed there would be no purpose for us to be here. Patricia
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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What better thing can we say about ourselves than to say we are a non conformist.
If we all conformed there would be no purpose for us to be here. Patricia
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Thanks so much, you have brought a big smile to my face.
Blessings,
Brother Badger
