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Comment from Cranial Thinker
Exceptional
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So wonderfully state as I heard a question of sorts dancing among these well chosen words above for who is the one that is truly qualified to give a definition of times existence and who can truly understand its manner of travel; does it have rules or laws of which it absolutely must follow or is it as you so creatively expressed time is a very good something no matter how you look at it simply because you still breathe and your hearts of twos continues to beat....Cranial Thinker

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
    Thanks again for your wonderful perception; if we were not here right now to measure, experience, and quantify TIME, would we still have time to do it before or after?
Comment from winnona
Excellent
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A well-written poem.The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader.a beautiful painting that completed the poem very well.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
    Thank-you so much for your kind words and continued support.

    Godspeed,

    Brother Badger
Comment from Jesse James Doty
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Wonderful choice with the Dali artwork. It makes for an excellent presentation. I love anything written about time. Your haiku expresses the essence of time. I love your choice of words, in particular, "time will roll on forever..." That line and the last line are so true. Thank you for sharing your philosophy with me. Now is a good time for all of us, lest we forget.
Take care, Jesse

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
    Thank-you so much for your kind words. It is through th eyes of my readers that I am able to gain an even broader understanding of my work. This one came to me in a flash, andorigainally looked like this,

    Time is going on
    Time will roll on forever
    Time goes backwards, too

    Thanks,
    Darren ~
reply by Jesse James Doty on 08-Feb-2017
    You're most welcome, Darren. I like what you chose to post the best. Although sometimes it feels like time is going backward, I agree.
    Jesse
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very well written haiku about time. I think you are so right about now being the right time. There may never be another tomorrow, we can only hope! Great words and imagery! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017


reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017
    Thank-you so much for your kind words.

    I really appreciate your comments.

    Blessings,

    Brother Badger