Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Hello, my dear friend. I love this one. I am sorry I have no sixes left for it though. especially these lines:

"Whether they be my friend or love
holds nary a consequence.
What's important is when
our locking eyes spark."

Bravo! Bob

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Louise Michelle

Excellent

I agree with this sentiment and it's nice to be reminded of it. Sometimes we get too caught up in the trials and tribulations of life and forget our spiritual nature.

We are all connected and even though a person may enter our life briefly or seemingly by chance, there is deeper meaning that we're not aware of. Very nicely done, Luna.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Wonderful double ethereal Jeni, when we meet new people or catch their eye in a fleeting moment we never know where that will lead and you but this into words splendidly.

Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Kingsland

Excellent

Everything in life affects everything else. Like when you throw a pebble in a pond. The ripples go out in every direction. This is a well-written verse that I just happen to agree with one hundred percent. I enjoyed partaking of its thoughts... John

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from ~Dovey

Excellent

Hi Luna:

The Etheree is one of my favorite styles. Here, you've done a double, so double the pleasure. :) Your form and syllable counts are perfect and none of the lines seem forced, which often happens with this style.

I especially loved these lines:
We touch the
start of
time.

Great job!

Kim

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Sis Cat

Excellent

Yes, I do like it, indeed. I enjoyed your Double Etheree on how there is no coincidences. Every encounter has a purpose, although we may not understand it at the time. In direct, sage-like verse you describe this. I enjoyed your eloquence, language, and thought. I can hear your mind thinking as you write and the poem unfolds before you like a rose:

"Ev'ry soul has influenced who I have,
or might, become as I travel through time
and space. I have more than one soul mate."

Your poem comes from a deep well of wisdom and experience.

Your conclusion about making meaningful connections is stellar:

"What's important is when
our locking eyes spark
A remembrance.
We touch the
start of
time."

Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a great etheree poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and great imagery. I know that the people that come into our life is ordained by God. Very good job! Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Yes, I like it! thank God for all the people who touch our lives whether only briefly or for a lifetime. there are those who leave lasting marks on our hearts and we can treasure those times all our lives.

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

Comment from mvbrooks

Excellent

You seem to enjoy this poem type and are able to control the syllable constraints so that the reader isn't aware of the line limits--but easily focuses on the flow of words and ideas. Your poem made me think of the poem For Whom the Bell Tolls. Glad your life path and mine are currently connecting as I enjoy your poems

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

Comment from Anastajiya

Excellent

Excellent poem! It flowed nicely and I thought the style of the poem was very interesting as well. I believe as well, that each person that enters your life is there to teach you a lesson and will impact you in some sort of way. Great poem once again, Anastajiya

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017