Comment from honeytree

Exceptional

Wonderful art work
for these words written
amazing to see what these
beetle bugs and weevils eat.
Loved the words and the colours
very much indeed.

Honey tree

 Comment Written 09-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

Thank you Annie for the wonderful stars!

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Tab,

I think you did a really good job in writing this in the chapter you were on.
I always enjoy reading your work and will continue to do so now that I'm back.
I have four more messages to answer then I'll try to post a poem.

Kat

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

Thank you Kat. I look forward to reading yours as well.

reply by MizKat on 09-Feb-2017

Sorry I didn't get it done. I'll try to do it today. Kat

Comment from country ranch writer

Excellent

Bugs need to put their two cents worth in the food chain of eaters. There are on a path od destruction Tand continue on till they are through for the time being.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

I just wish they would eat the weeds instead:) Thanks so much.

reply by country ranch writer on 09-Feb-2017

seems they don't know the difference

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Oh yes a true haiku.
Loved the two interconnecting lines introducing the bugs, and the last line is clear to anyone who has watched plants being devoured. lol

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

Thank you Barb:)

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Ah, very clever, Teresa, and there's nothing here that "bugs me" about this well-written haiku.
Thanks so much for yet another outstanding addition to the book.
Good luck in the selection process!

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

Thank you Dean:) Nice signature with haiku square.

reply by Dean Kuch on 09-Feb-2017

You're very welcome, Teresa.
~Dean :}

Comment from Douglas Paul

Excellent

I like this one, my friend. Solid first two lines with clear imagery that would stand without the picture. The satori is a good insight into the first two lines and fun play on words with the more typical "food for thought"

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017

Thank you Doug:)

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Indeed, 'aha' how fantastic this Haiku I find as I enjoyed Nature in action, so clearly conveyed the theme in good flow of thoughts coupled with fantastic commentary visual imagery, superb contrast element, treat and wisdom reflection.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you so much:)

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

A creative and clever haiku Teresa. Loved the satori line and the excellent play on words.
Well done
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you so much Janet for the great review:)

Comment from Sasha

Excellent

Lovely work with this. Yes, the arrival of spring and all that comes with it. I am enjoying these challenges, just don't have the nerve to try one myself.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you Sasha:)

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked the way you captured the continuing circle of life with the vivid picture and your 4-7-4 haiku with alliteration. Cheers- Joan

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 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thank you so much Joan:)