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Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "haiku (flowers devoured) "A collection of haiku written by FanStory Poets
21 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Teresa, I get something like this on my Roses...sometimes a spray helps...sometimes not...truly food without thought...very well thought of sweet girl...and the picture...EEEKKKKK...love ya my friend Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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HI Teresa, I get something like this on my Roses...sometimes a spray helps...sometimes not...truly food without thought...very well thought of sweet girl...and the picture...EEEKKKKK...love ya my friend Linda xxoo
Comment Written 14-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2017
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Thank you Linda:)
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you are always soooo welcome Teresa...have a great day....xxoo love
Comment from Lulube
Love this play on an old familiar saying, Food for thought. the photo is great, they certainly do look as if they are feasting heavily, devouring, great choice of word.
good work
lulube
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Love this play on an old familiar saying, Food for thought. the photo is great, they certainly do look as if they are feasting heavily, devouring, great choice of word.
good work
lulube
Comment Written 13-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 13-Feb-2017
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Thank you honey for the six stars!
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welcome
lulube
Comment from damommy
Lovely haiku with just the right artwork.
Those little beetles just go right on eating and don't see it as destruction the way we do.
I like "Food without thought."
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Lovely haiku with just the right artwork.
Those little beetles just go right on eating and don't see it as destruction the way we do.
I like "Food without thought."
Comment Written 11-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you Yvonne:)
Comment from Lu Saluna
This is an amazing haiku.
I get a very clear concrete image. These insects, consuming the flowers destroying their beauty while they munch away. "food without thought" is an excellent satori, it is a perfect picture of their mindless activity.
Well done.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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This is an amazing haiku.
I get a very clear concrete image. These insects, consuming the flowers destroying their beauty while they munch away. "food without thought" is an excellent satori, it is a perfect picture of their mindless activity.
Well done.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you so much Lu:)
Comment from ronnie k
I have no idea how you are able too say so very much with so very much LOL, I thought I was reading upside down until I realized I was reading poetry from a devoted POET, like the new look!
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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I have no idea how you are able too say so very much with so very much LOL, I thought I was reading upside down until I realized I was reading poetry from a devoted POET, like the new look!
Comment Written 10-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you my wonderful friend!
Comment from IndianaIrish
Great imagery, Teresa, and just love your satori. Devoured is the perfect word to describe their feeding habits. Great haiku.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Great imagery, Teresa, and just love your satori. Devoured is the perfect word to describe their feeding habits. Great haiku.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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Thank you Karyn:)
Comment from Leineco
LOL - on BOTH sides of the equation! ;-)
'tis pure instinct that drives them both - Mother Nature's signature
modus operendi -
No thought given,
no thoughts sought;
merely driven
. . .mutually beneficial
(at least in the species long run)
:-)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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LOL - on BOTH sides of the equation! ;-)
'tis pure instinct that drives them both - Mother Nature's signature
modus operendi -
No thought given,
no thoughts sought;
merely driven
. . .mutually beneficial
(at least in the species long run)
:-)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2017
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:) Thank you my friend for the great review:)You
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Good haiku Teresa with lines one and two interconnecting perfectly - your satori is very good - 'food without thought' clever play on 'food for thought' Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Good haiku Teresa with lines one and two interconnecting perfectly - your satori is very good - 'food without thought' clever play on 'food for thought' Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Thank you Dorothy. I appreciate the review:)
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Yes this is well written good strong word choice in the opening line makes the readers think well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Yes this is well written good strong word choice in the opening line makes the readers think well done my friend I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Thank you Jill:)
Comment from Dawn Munro
Hahaha! What a clever haiku, Teresa - I just LOVE the satori. Yes, those thoughtless insects, eating a flower. At LEAST they could go after a weed. This is a wonderful contribution to the book.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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Hahaha! What a clever haiku, Teresa - I just LOVE the satori. Yes, those thoughtless insects, eating a flower. At LEAST they could go after a weed. This is a wonderful contribution to the book.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2017
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I know, right. Let them be useful and eat the weeds! Thanks so much Dawn.
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My pleasure. :))
