Comment from winnona

Excellent

a well-written contest entry. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. I think you completed the challenge of the contest well.

 Comment Written 10-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2017

Thanks for the review, cheers, j

Comment from Aiona

Excellent

Dang. I'm outta sixes. I love love love this little poem. The picture matches it perfectly as well. It summarizes in 3 stanzas the fun and joy of the fair, and it even rhymes! I love poems that rhyme, and this one had to rhyme. And makes me wanna go to a fair.

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thanks for your five stars and the one from the heart. Don't we relish a new love? Glad you enjoyed it. Where are you from? Cheers, j

Comment from Jackarrie

Excellent

Hi Mystery author
I do believe you have filled the requirements for this contest light and sweet, You title show this very clear. The poem is a joy to read. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Mary

 Comment Written 08-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Thanks for the encouraging review.Ahhh, new love, cheers, j

reply by Jackarrie on 08-Feb-2017

I hope it goes well in the voting and in the new love.xx

reply by the author on 08-Feb-2017

Ha ha I have been happily married for 23 years, but a girl can dream huh? Cheers, j